Talk:The Untouchable Tour/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:14, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

• Comment 1) WP:ACCESSIBILITY concerns – the table lacks ! scope="row" to identify rows (see WP:DTAB). Also, MOS:DTT#Avoiding column headers in the middle of the table advises against headers, such as "North America" and "Europe" in the table and provides two alternatives; 2) why is it necessary to collapse two short Set list "notes" using {{Hidden}} (see MOS:DONTHIDE)? —Ojorojo (talk) 13:19, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

@Ojorojo:

1) I fixed it. The nominator can fix the other issue.

? the recent edits did not add the code to identify the rows nor remove the headers (see the links above). —Ojorojo (talk) 16:01, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

The headers and rows the nominator can fix as well. Took care of the collums.

MaranoFan has addressed the issues, but consider whether a second table for a single entry is desirable: does one concert in Spain constitute a "leg" (can't tell from scanning the refs)? One table listing the countries should be sufficient; it's not important for the article to identify Spain as being in Europe or the U.S. and Canada in North America. —Ojorojo (talk) 14:05, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

@Ojorojo: I can't tell either if it is a leg or not, but as it was part of her tour we will call it so, wouldn't be the first time that artist make some concert overseas due to being promoted or like a special ocasion and added to the tour. Make the changes you disere with the tables, let me know aftewards and I will see and let maranofan know as well. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:29, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

As a test, I made one table with the Spanish entry.[1] Just a suggestion – use or not. —Ojorojo (talk) 15:10, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

@MaranoFan: Despite being the reviewer I will leave it up to the nominator. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:15, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

I like this one by Ojorojo, feel free to add it back. MarioSoulTruthFan, let me know if something else needs to be done.--NØ 15:53, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

2) It is not necessary actually, I will take care of that. Thanks por pointing it out. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:18, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

That's the idea, but maybe Notes should be added to identify it. —Ojorojo (talk) 16:01, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:35, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Fine

Lead

• all four singles from Trainor's debut major-label studio album Title, → which are?

Background and development

• Live Nation Entertainment were announced to be the tour's producers, and...as its → Live Nation Entertainment was announced as the tour's producers, while...were the
• all four singles from Trainor's debut major-label studio album Title, → which are?
• "One Dance" → year of release between brackets
• At her Greenville show Trainor also added Title to her setlist, after a fan requested it. → source?

Synopsis and reception

• Trainor thanks → She thanks
• At one date, → what does this mean?
• The first paragraph doesn' flow right. Needs to be revised in the end.
• Lauren Craddock, also from Billboard → Lauren Craddock from the same magazine,

Canceled show

• Only the venue changed, right?

Set list

• During her shows in New York show she also performed "Good to Be Alive" → needs to be mentioned
• On the same note, this is the setlist for one of the shows in NY, not both → so be more specific as you don't have the setlist for the other
• During the July 22 show in Los Angeles → she also performed "Good To Be Alive"

Tour dates

• Leg 1 - North America; Leg 2- Europe
• Wikilink Common Kings.

Notes

• The concert on July 14, 2016, in Nampa, Idaho at Ford Amphitheatre, was originally set to take place in Vancouver, Canada at the PNE Amphitheatre , but was changed for unknown reasons. → source?

References

• I advise archiving all the links
• Reference sixteen under "Meghan Trainor Live In Miami" is dead. → change publisher to coca cola company
• The Coca-Cola source doesn't mention Meghan Trainor, at least in its current sate.
• The Western Star → dead link
• SHOUTING! All caps in one reference

External links

• Remove → it is pointless.

Overall

• @MaranoFan: you can now address the issues. On hold. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 01:20, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

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