Talk:The Way (TV series)

Latest comment: 3 months ago by 2001:BB6:47ED:FA58:4921:EE71:A61C:E352 in topic Long sentence in Synopsis

The "reception" section is written in a too personal style, with an exaggerated and biased use of quotes to corroborate the author's personal opinion of the negative reception. The inappropriate use of extrapolated quotes to support a thesis can easily manipulate the reader's perception. Fede Ren88 (talk) 09:24, 21 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

The section was actually a little too verbose and partial (I'm sure not intentionally), so I edited it into a more essential and neutral version. LilyLilac88 (talk) 14:21, 21 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
Removing all but one negative review and keeping the one positive review is not "neutrality", but false balance (WP:PROPORTION) and will be seen as disruptive editing at best and vandalism at worst. Rambling Rambler (talk) 15:00, 21 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

Long sentence in Synopsis

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  • Geoff attempts to convince Hogwood of their innocence and to let them go though the latter rebuffs the suggestion, admitting that while he knows the decision over who he's to target was made by an unaccountable black-box algorithmic system he'll follow the instructions he's been given nonetheless and gives the camp an ultimatum to hand over Owen or be razed to the ground.

That's 63 words in one sentence! I can't keep track, so I can't tell you what it says. Is there any way to break it up so it's readable? 2001:BB6:47ED:FA58:4921:EE71:A61C:E352 (talk) 16:33, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply