Talk:The Witch and the Saint

Major rewrite needed

The article resembles a report written by a high school student for band. The section "The Story" is way too detailed and should probably be shortened and merged with another for starters. The syntax is awkward and sometimes nearly incomprehensible. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.198.211.245 (talk) 07:41, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

The evaluation appears to be written by a flutist or upper woodwind band player. It would probably be better to include information about all the instruments. When the flutes have the melody it is immediately mentioned. However, it just writes "returns to the ominous feel" without mentioning what instrument plays the ominous melody, and counter-melody (alto saxophone, euphonium respectively). It also mentions the difficulty for the flute piece of the music without mentioning the difficulty for the rest of the concert band. --76.178.150.134 (talk) 04:10, 16 March 2012 (UTC)