Talk:The Worst Thing About My Sister
Latest comment: 12 years ago by 2.24.36.0 in topic Tone
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editThis article needs some general editing regarding the style of the prose. Especially colloquial phrases like "A chubby girl who sucks up to Katie and Alisha so they don't bully her" should be changed. De728631 (talk) 18:06, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
Interesting article, it may need improving, but it shouldn't be dumped — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.24.36.0 (talk) 23:13, 27 May 2012 (UTC)