Talk:The Young Victoria/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Aranea Mortem in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aranea Mortem (talk contribs count) 15:55, 9 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this up, it's looking pretty good, and I'll probably pass it with some improvs.

  • Could you remove the "of the United Kingdom" from Queen Victoria (first sentence)? It seems a little superfluous.
  • "Victoria moves into the just-completed Buckingham Palace" Victoria moves into a recently constructed/completed Buckingham Palace?
  • "They also supported arts and sciences which was celebrated" I could be wrong, but is isn't it "that were celebrated"?
  • "an historian" A his...
  • "The producer later remembered, "She..." Lower case the s.
Thanks for the review! I'll keep working on the others. Ruby comment! 16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)Reply
All of the rest of your great suggestions have now been implemented. Thanks again for the review! Kind regards, Ruby comment! 18:29, 9 September 2011 (UTC)Reply
Okay, good work, all passed! Aranea Mortem (talk to me) 13:44, 10 September 2011 (UTC)Reply