Talk:Tiberius III/GA1

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 19:34, 14 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 19:34, 14 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • Tiberius III (Greek: Τιβέριος Γʹ, Tiberios III; Latin: Tiberius Augustus) Unlink both Greek and Latin because of common terms. Also do we know when he was born and when he died?
    The links are actually from the language templates themselves, and cannot be removed; and no, we don't have his death and birth dates down to a point where it would be useful to put a (life-death) date part into the lede. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • the primary rival of the Byzantine Empire Link Byzantine Empire.
  •   Done
  • revolting against the Umayyad Caliph Yazid I Decapitalise "Caliph".
  •   Done
  • Iberia is overlinked
  •   Done
  • where he campaigned successfully before leading troops in Azerbaijan and Caucasian Albania.[10][1] Maybe add "the Region of" before Azerbaijan. It could confuse the readers the same with Iberia. Also re-order the refs in numerical order.
  •   Done
  • I believe one "however" is enough for this short article.
  •   Done
  • Exarchate of Africa is overlinked.
  •   Done
  • Same as above with Carthage.
  •   Done
  • had been captured near the Propontis to return to their homelands,[3][20][16] Re-order the refs.
  •   Done
  • gained the support of the Khazar Khagan Busir Sea of blue.
    Not really a way to avoid that, all of them are worth linking to. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • humiliated, before being taken away and beheaded.[1][21][3] Re-order the refs here.
  •   Done
  • No edit wars.

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  • Some ISBNs have hyphens others don't maybe standardise the ISBNs.
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  • Bacharach's title doesn't match with the ISBN?
      Done
  • Google Books claims that the book of Donner is from 2012. Which one is correct?
    Google Books uses the date of the book uploaded to it; WorldCat gives all the dates, the book is actually from 2010, but a 2012 book (reprint probably) was the one uploaded to Google Books. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Prosopographie der mittelbyzantinischen Zeit Online. Berlin-Brandenburgische Akademie der Wissenschaften. Nach Vorarbeiten F. Winkelmanns erstellt source has a title error.
  •   Done
  • Google Books claims that Norwich's first book was published in 1988 and the second book is from 1997. Which one is correct?
    Same situation here. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • No location for Saxby and Angelov's book?
  •   Done
  • Is there no ISBN for Wellhausen's book?
    None. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:05, 16 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • No OR.

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  • Looks good to me.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:18, 15 September 2019 (UTC)Reply