Talk:Tilbury Fort/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:15, 4 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Great, I would love to review one of your masterpieces. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:15, 4 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Fairly well-written as always, so these are mere nitpicks :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:37, 4 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Most changes made, comments left on the others. Thanks for the review! Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
16th century
  • his wife, Catherine of Aragon Comma after "Aragon"
  • You may consider converting tons, though it is not mandatory.
  • James Nedeham and Christopher Morice Better add their professions to introduce them
  • "Rampart" is linked twice
17th century
  • sixty-six men in 1651 "66" would appear less wordy and better per WP:MOSNUM
18th–19th centuries
  • I wonder if links are needed for "rainwater" and "cricket"
20th–21st centuries
  • I don't think a hyphen is needed in "down-stream"
Architecture
  • under the direction of Sir Bernard de Gomme You can call him "de Gnomme" everywhere once you have introduced him

That should be it. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:37, 4 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

@Hchc2009: Please respond. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:22, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the changes. I am happy to promote this. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:41, 10 June 2016 (UTC)Reply