Talk:Tim Brookshaw
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Cloptonson in topic Missing phrase in sentence?
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Missing phrase in sentence?
edit"In the 1959 Grand National his he came second on Wyndbergh…"
I suspect there may have been an omission between the 'his' and 'he'- is there, whoever has written this page?Cloptonson (talk)
- It was a stray word not a missing phrase - fixed. Sorry, I was confused about first winner - Dufton Pike at Wolverhampton was his first winner as a trainer, not as a jockey. Thanks for pointing it out. Southdevonian (talk) 22:16, 28 February 2020 (UTC)
- I had been wondering if the sentence had intended to say the race was his first (or whatever it was in scheme of events) Grand National. I heard on local radio that a biography of him has been published and launched this week, which may be a good info source.Cloptonson (talk) 11:55, 29 February 2020 (UTC)
First winning race
edit"His first winner was Dufton Pike at Wolverhampton in 1948."
However, this sentence is uncited. The wiki article on Woore Racecourse, which was on the north east Shropshire/north west Staffordshire border, well to the north of Wolverhampton, states his name among a short list of jockeys who had their first winning races at Woore; this is cited to a newspaper article, published 2013. Which of the two is correct?Cloptonson (talk) 20:28, 28 February 2020 (UTC)
- Woore is correct - fixed. Southdevonian (talk) 22:27, 28 February 2020 (UTC)