Talk:Timeline of condensed matter physics

Latest comment: 1 year ago by FULBERT in topic Lede

Conflicting information?

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In the lede, the article says According to Philip W. Anderson, the term "condensed matter" was coined in 1965. However, in the body, the article says 1967 – Volker Heine coins the term condensed matter. This is conflicting information. -- TheLonelyPather (talk) 03:10, 3 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

@TheLonelyPather: it just says when it was coined not who coined it.--ReyHahn (talk) 09:11, 3 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
@ReyHahn: I saw your change to the lede. It is better. Thanks a lot! -- TheLonelyPather (talk) 12:14, 3 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

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FULBERT thank you for reviewing the page. You suggested to improve on the lead, do we need more for a timeline article? Do you have any example of timeline article lead that I could take a look at? ReyHahn (talk) 00:21, 10 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

@ReyHahn It may help with a sentence or two about what the article is about instead of a bullet list. See Timeline of Russian interference in the 2016 United States elections or Timeline of Star Trek for examples of what this can look like. Thank you for your contribution. FULBERT (talk) 00:51, 10 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
FULBERT I updated the lead, is it better?--ReyHahn (talk) 01:37, 10 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
@ReyHahn The lead is better, though it may help to remove the bullet list that still remains there (in the lead above the Contents. FULBERT (talk) 03:11, 11 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
@FULBERT: just not as a list? Like that? --ReyHahn (talk) 08:30, 11 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
@ReyHahn This is much clearer now. Nice work on this article. FULBERT (talk) 13:05, 12 October 2023 (UTC)Reply