Talk:Title (song)/Archive 1

Archive 1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 14:43, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Lead

• and debut major-label studio album → you really don't need "major label" here
• Kevin Kadish produced the song → replace "the song" with "the track" to avoid word repetition
• The ska influences aren't mentioned or cited in the article, so remove this assertion
• Its lyrics delve on the singer demanding her love interest → In its lyrics, the singer demands her love interest
• In 2015, Trainor released a music video → You should mention the exact release date here
• The video for "Title" was released via the special edition of its parent album → Too much info for the lead, instead shortly describe what the singer does in the video
• in both the countries → remove "the"

Background and composition

• "Title" was written by Trainor and Kadish → write both names out here and link the latter
• Link the album credits after "the latter"
• Trainor felt that "Title" → replace "Title" with "the song" so that we avoid the repetition of words
• and said that she loved that it showed a little → you could replace this with "particularly noting a"
• whereas David Baron played piano and organ on the song → you don't need "the song" here; link the album credits afterwards
• a duration of 2 minutes and 54 seconds (2:54) → The "(2:54)" is superfluous
• Link the album credits after the length
• morphed into a programmed beat. It contains → morphed into a programmed beat, further containing
• The rap verse in "Title" was compared → you don't need "in 'Title' here"
• of MTV News wrote that the song serves → replace "the song" with "Title" to avoid the repetition of words
• L.V. Anderson from Slate called "Title" the → replace "Title" with "it" here for the same reason as above

Music video and promotion

• Link Los Angeles
• It was directed by Anthony Phan. Its premise follows a theme → Directed by Anthony Phan, its premise follows a theme
• wearing a black coloured coat → wearing a black-coloured coat
• in a pastel-coloured gown and lime fur. Trainor presents → in a pastel-coloured gown and lime fur, and later presents
• interspersed with Trainor and the newly crowned → interspersed with her and the newly crowned
• Trainor performed "Title" → Introduce this topic with "For fruther promotion, ..."

Other things

Copy-violation

• 14.5% is a very good percentage

References

• No dead links! Congrats!
• As far as I've checked them, the refs do cover the assertions made in this article

Outcome

 On hold – Need a few more changes to be a GA. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:54, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Done, great review! The only change I didn't make is removing "major-label" because believe it or not, this is a super controversial topic that has been discussed time and again on Talk:Title (Meghan Trainor album) and Talk:Meghan Trainor discography and people settled on calling it her debut "major-label" studio album. Regards.--NØ 06:20, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Congrats for a GA! Greetings; Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:23, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

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