Talk:Togo at the 2014 Winter Olympics/GA1

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Nominator: Yue (talk · contribs) 08:27, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

I will review this neat little article. It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Hi @Yue, review is below. Pinging in case you don't have this page on your watchlist. It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:23, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

@It is a wonderful world: Howdy! Thank you for the review. I'll get to your suggestions shortly, some time late this week. I'm still abroad for a few days so I can't immediately jump onto your suggestions and make those tweaks. I'll review them on the plane! Yue🌙 14:51, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

No worries! Take your time and enjoy your trip! It is a wonderful world (talk) 03:24, 10 December 2024 (UTC)

Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4) clock

Lead

The Togolese delegation consisted of two women athletes in two sports: Alessia Afi Dipol in alpine skiing Petitjean was the flag bearer for the opening ceremony: It appears you forgot to write the rest of the sentence! It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

 Fixed. Yue🌙 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Link "Mathilde-Amivi Petitjean" when her name has been added. It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Background

Accordingly, the two athletes of the Togolese delegation were not from Togo.: Uncited, the citation will also need to justify including the information about the climate. It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Removed. Yue🌙 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Suggest linking "naturalised" It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

 Done. Yue🌙 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Dipol has no familial connections to Togo: I'm not sure "familial" is the right word here, since in the next sentence it is explained that her father owns a clothing factory in the country. It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Is it possible to explain precisely how she was got naturalised citizenship with no familial connections? It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Is "Togolese Ski Federation" something that is notable enough to be redlinked? It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

I don't think so; although from what I gather they're an official body, they're incredibly small (a handful of people) and lack reliable coverage outside of mentions of Alessia Afi Dipol. Yue🌙 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Alpine skiing

I don't think "Main article:" is the correct banner here, that suggests that the linked article goes into more detail about that specific topic. I think the "See also" banner would be better. It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

 Done. Yue🌙 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

She did not finish the women's slalom race, held on 21 February, after starting the first run: Are there any sources which explain why? It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Cross-country skiing

She competed in the women's 10 kilometre classical race on 13 February. She finished...: Suggest joining these sentences for better flow It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

I think cut "Despite her finish", it suggests that she performed poorly but this is an opinion. It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

 Done. Yue🌙 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Sources clock

Health/formatting (Criterion 2a) clock

I added archives to the links which were vulnerable to link rot. It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Reliability (Criterion 2b) Y

All news or pdfs published by seemingly reliable publishers on this non-controversial subject. No issues.

Spot check (Criteria 2b, 2c, 2d) clock

[1, 2]: Y

[10]: Y

[11]: Y

[12]: Y

[14]: Doesn't support the number of competitors or finishing time It is a wonderful world (talk) 02:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

Copyvio (Criterion 2d) Y

Neither Earwig nor my spot check found any problems.

Media Y

Sadly there seems to be no copyright free images of the athletes. Not needed for GA though.