Talk:Tolkien and race/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:49, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

• during the two World Wars suggest during both World Wars
• I avoided it as we have "both" in the sentence already.

Moral geography: West versus East

• Any North-South bias was denied by Tolkien suggest Allegations of a North-South bias were denied by Tolkien
  • Done.

Evidence of anti-racism

• to get published in Nazi Germany suggest in order to be published in Nazi Germany
  • Done.

Towards a balanced view

• Suggest removing the "further reading Orc" link; as superfluous to previous links.
  • Done.

• @Chiswick Chap: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Feel free to revert any of my edits. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:50, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:06, 20 September 2021 (UTC)