Talk:Tommy Tour/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Chrisnait in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 19:27, 20 March 2020 (UTC)Reply


I'll check this out sometime this weekend. :-) – zmbro (talk) 19:27, 20 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thanks Ojorojo. I'll keep that in mind. – zmbro (talk) 14:15, 21 March 2020 (UTC)Reply
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History
  • "They noticed the audience would all stand up at the same time, and stay standing. This indicated that live performances of Tommy had a positive reaction from audiences." → "They noticed the audience would all stand up at the same time, and stay standing, indicating that live performances of Tommy had a positive reaction from audiences."
  • "The show later became a popular bootleg recording." Looks like this isn't sourced. And what bootleg album? Has it ever seen official release? Been into Bowie lately and his bootleg album Santa Monica '72 was officially released as Live Santa Monica '72 in 2008 and am wondering if it's been the same for this one.
  • "The Who ended 1969 with tour of Europe" → "The Who ended 1969 with a tour of Europe"
  • "While 14 February University of Leeds Refectory and 15 February Hull City Hall performances were both recorded," → "While performances on 14 February at the University of Leeds Refectory and 15 February at Hull City Hall were both recorded"
  • Link Live at Leeds, as it's not been linked in the body as of this point
Films and albums
  • Looks good
Tour band
Repertoire
Tour dates
  • Looks good, great job sourcing everything
References
Final thoughts

 Pass All good for me. – zmbro (talk) 19:52, 23 March 2020 (UTC)Reply