Talk:Tonga at the 2012 Summer Olympics
Latest comment: 7 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
Tonga at the 2012 Summer Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 9, 2017. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 19:47, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
"Tonga participated in the 2012 Summer Olympics in London, United Kingdom, which was held..." Wouldn't it be "which were held"? Olympiad would use "was", I think Olympics would use "were"
"The delegation included three competitors: two athletics competitors..." "...competitors: two in athletics" has a much better flow to it
"...defeated by New Zealand 10-0 in their last group stage matche..." No "e" here in match
Just some very minor touchups for this one, nice work! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:47, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
- @QatarStarsLeague: Thank you once again for another review. I have implemented the suggested changes. MWright96 (talk) 21:01, 8 August 2017 (UTC)