Talk:Tonga at the 2012 Summer Olympics

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 19:47, 8 August 2017 (UTC)Reply


"Tonga participated in the 2012 Summer Olympics in London, United Kingdom, which was held..." Wouldn't it be "which were held"? Olympiad would use "was", I think Olympics would use "were"


"The delegation included three competitors: two athletics competitors..." "...competitors: two in athletics" has a much better flow to it


"...defeated by New Zealand 10-0 in their last group stage matche..." No "e" here in match


Just some very minor touchups for this one, nice work! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:47, 8 August 2017 (UTC)Reply