Talk:Tonya Edwards

Latest comment: 5 years ago by 2600:8800:784:8F00:C23F:D5FF:FEC4:D51D in topic The lede needs work

The lede needs work

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The first 'sentence' in the lede is not a sentence, it's a fragment. It appears that the last part -- after "currently" -- is missing. Since I don't know the missing part, I don't want to "edit" it. The easiest fix right now is taking the "currently" out and putting a period immediately after "Flint, Michigan"; then there'll be a complete sentence.

Thoughts / comments ? 2600:8800:784:8F00:C23F:D5FF:FEC4:D51D (talk) 06:22, 24 February 2019 (UTC)Reply