Talk:Toothache/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vinethemonkey (talk · contribs) 05:14, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

All right, here I am. I'm ready to roll!

Sources

Most are good and reliable, although I would question the use of making a Wikisource as a source. Please replace this with a more reliable source; otherwise, the section that mentions it will get removed.

 Done

Wonderer

If you wonder where it is, I'll notify you right now, it is number 53.

I don't understand sorry... Lesion (talk) 22:31, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Pictures

Good use of pictures. There are quite a few pictures here, and they are all adequate.

Length

I say this is a good length for an article.

Notice sources

See notices for improvement. It may affect the length, but certainly not my opinion. Even if you remove it, I will still like the length.

Other comments

Good grammar/spelling. This article is neutral and well-written. List used. Good! I think that as long as you change the single source, I will put this into a good article. Thank you!

Thank you, I've got limited access to internet for a couple of days then will update. @Lesion: Ian Furst (talk) 18:40, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Thank you also. I asked about Wikisource on the help desk and people were agreeing with you that we should not link to wiktionary, wikisource etc... which I found surprizing but the MOS does indeed state not to link to wikis. Some helpful person, presumably reading the helpdesk msg or your comment in the GA RV has already replaced the wikisource with a book, so no issues with that now. Lesion (talk) 22:13, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Great! I will update it in a bit. Good job again on this article.VINETHEMONKEY 04:43, 12 March 2014 (UTC)Vinethemonkey