Talk:Topoľčany pogrom/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Catrìona in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 10:04, 26 December 2018 (UTC)Reply


  • I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:04, 26 December 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • No DABs, external links good.
  • Images properly licensed.
  • capital Bratislava comma between these.
  • Link town council, am and pm or convert to 24 hour time, ie 08:00, intelligensia
  • Provide conversions for all metric measurements into Imperial units. The convert template can do it automatically.
  • incomers Not a word I see often. Perhaps "new comers" or "carpetbaggers"?
  • There are no longer any Jews living in the town. Rephrase to provide a date
  • As per MOS:APPENDIX, you should use header code rather than bolding the headers in your references section. Lvl4 headers should approximate the same look.
  • Be consistent using title case in your English-language sources.
  • Add "|lastauthoramp=y" to have your sources with multiple authors match the format of your cites.
  • Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:03, 27 December 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Sturmvogel 66: Many thanks for the review; I think I've fixed everything you mentioned above. Catrìona (talk) 19:09, 27 December 2018 (UTC)Reply