Talk:Tora Harris/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Moswento in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Moswento (talk · contribs) 14:37, 11 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • Hello! I'll be reviewing this one. Detailed review should magically appear below in the next 48 hours. Moswento talky 14:37, 11 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
    • Sorry, that was a long 48 hours! Off-wiki things got in the way. There's still more work needed on this article to get the pretty green symbol, but nothing that can't be done in the next few days, I wouldn't have thought. Comments of things that need to be addressed, mostly minor prose issues, are below, plus a few optional suggestions. Other than that, the article is well-referenced, verifiable, neutral, stable, no plagiarism etc. There aren't any images to worry about. Once my questions below are addressed, I'll give this another look over, hopefully with the desired GA result. Good work! Moswento talky 21:39, 15 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
      • Great work! I really like what you've done with rearranging and rewriting text - huge improvement, above and beyond my expectations. I think you can ignore my first comment on the lead, because re-reading it I don't have a problem with the ordering. The other change you didn't implement below is also fine to leave as is. Just two very very quick follow-up points, and then I will very happily promote this to GA. Great work, again! Moswento talky 16:20, 16 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
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  • Nothing of concern here. All looks good.