Talk:Toronto Paramedic Association

Latest comment: 16 years ago by CyberSach in topic Revision

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Please consider revising this out of Wikipedia before you post it here. As of now, your information is mostly advertisement (especially objectives). Please do a rewrite before you repost the page. <3 bunny 00:27, 28 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

Thank you. I will take out Objectives--Vfarren (talk) 00:42, 28 February 2008 (UTC)VfarrenReply

Is it the use of the word "objectives" or is it the actual contents of the objectives? --Vfarren (talk) 00:44, 28 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

It was the content. I think it's looking a bit better now (with the minor revision to the introductory section and the removal of objectives), so I'm going to remove the CSD tag, but this page needs expansion. I've done some simple formatting as a start. <3 bunny 01:22, 28 February 2008 (UTC)Reply