Talk:Tourism in Mumbai
Latest comment: 6 years ago by HarshiVajpayee in topic No Destinations Mentioned(Less Details)
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Unclear wording
editOverall, the content is not bad; I think it's just in need of a bit of rewording to make it easier for readers to understand. Also, I noticed that the tone was marked as being too opinionated. While rewriting some of the sentences for clarity over the next few days, I plan to change the overall tone of the article to be more neutral.
No Destinations Mentioned(Less Details)
editIn few sections, only number is mentioned, name of destination is not available in the post. I should edit these sections as per my experience of visiting Mumbai. I request you all to add more places if I miss any. Also I'm adding few places near Mumbai that are worth visiting to enhance the content. Let's discuss if anyone find it not important, I'm also in dilemma whether to add it or not.