Talk:Trézéguet (Egyptian footballer)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review

Requested move 7 June 2018

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The result of the move request was: moved as requested per the discussion below. Dekimasuよ! 18:08, 14 June 2018 (UTC)Reply


Mahmoud Hassan (footballer)Trézéguet (Egyptian footballer) – Per WP:COMMONNAME and WP:NICKNAME, as he is most often referred to as "Trézéguet". FIFA refers to him by this name on his profile and squad list. Soccerway, Worldfootball, BBC, and ESPNFC all refer to him as Trézéguet. He is almost never referred to without his nickname. Shikabala and Kahraba (footballer) are similar Egyptian naming examples. S.A. Julio (talk) 17:19, 7 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 23:03, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply


  • ”Belgian side Mouscron later Turkish side” missing an and. - Done
  • Decide if David Trezeguet used diacritics or not - Done
  • Unclear which of the two sides Sayed Abdel-Hafiz was director of football for. - Done

More later. Courcelles (talk) 23:10, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • In the transfer speculation are we talking British or Egyptian Pounds. Needs to be specific. - Done
  • ”even appearances for the club was”. Missing a pronoun here. - Done
  • ’andyo even considered’. Andyo? - Done
  • ’3– victory” - Done
  • ”Trézéguet despite agreeing personal terms ”. Seems to be another missing word - Done
  • Id expand the international career section. Did he do anything notable at U20? He scored goals, mention those. And his World Cup participation could be described in more detail.

That’s all I’ve got for now Courcelles (talk) 23:38, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, I've made a start and checked off most of these. I'll have a look at expanding the international section as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 04:42, 25 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Courcelles: I've expanded his international career section in a few places, wasn't really able to add much to the World Cup as he didn't really do a lot quite franky. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 09:46, 25 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
Looks better, I'll promote this now. Courcelles (talk) 15:45, 25 July 2018 (UTC)Reply