Talk:Training Day (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:09, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

• Again here, is there a production still you could use for the infobox?
• Please note all the characters' full names, as well as their actors, on first reference in the infobox.
• Also, I like the idea of grouping the "Plot" paragraphs into each subplot. As it reads right now, the plot jumps around too much and gets confusing.

• It's a bit hard to separate the little plot strands, for they are all tied together. -- NoD'ohnuts (talk) 23:06, 24 January 2013 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts

• Deangelo's name is misspelled as "deAngelo" a few times. Please make consistent.
• In the infobox, guest character "Jahmilla Jackson as Gwyneth Philbin" is noted, but not included in the prose or cited. It at least needs a reference.
• Dup links tool shows for duplicate links: Will Ferrell twice; Garage Sale (The Office); and Anchorman.
• No problems with dab links. Check links shows all external links are working. The image of Ferrell is appropriately licensed.
• You should also note Ferrell's reception for the rest of the story arc, I recall there was a lot of buzz about him appearing. Did reviews on his performance ever change?
• Were there no cultural references?
• Finally, you should note that this episode is near the end of Steve Carrell's run and why he quit the show.

Will await your responses. —Ed!^(talk) 16:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

Excellent work. Passing the GA. —Ed!^(talk) 03:38, 28 January 2013 (UTC)