Talk:Travelers Aid Family Services of Boston

Review comments

This looks great so far! My one suggestion would be to break up the paragraphs based on the timeline on which they occurred. For example, your second paragraph could be put under a section that covers the organization between a range of years, and your last paragraph could be put under a "present day" header. Elizabethrivelli (talk) 21:05, 22 October 2014 (UTC)

Peer Edit

This is a very informative article, but a few things may also want to be looked at. One thing I think could add to this article would be the use of an infobox, because it is an easy way for readers to find out key facts. Another way this article could be fixed is if the first "Historical Overview" section was split up into either two, or three sections. It seems like the second and third paragraph are more about present day than the past. Lastly, the final two sections for the key people should be filled in. Other than these changes it is a well written, and informative wikipedia article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ohart3 (talk • contribs) 16:18, 24 October 2014 (UTC)

Additional comments, Fall 2014 class

Congratulations on your first article! It looks like this isn't quite finished yet, so I'd recommend that rather than focusing on adding more info, you could delete the empty sections and instead clean up the references first. (It's best to not have empty sections, but rather wait on adding those sections until you have finished the content -- you can always work on them in your sandbox -- so you could delete the empty sections.) You have a good start here! So right now I'd recommend working with what you have: clean up the references and add links to other Wikipedia articles and links back to this page (per the templates at the top). AmandaRR123 (talk) 16:27, 28 October 2014 (UTC)