Talk:Travis Jankowski/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by REDMAN 2019 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 11:39, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
I will take a look at this. Review coming soon. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 11:39, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
General
editThere are several Duplicate links in the article. You can install User:Evad37/duplinks-alt if you want as it makes it substantially easier to spot them. I will point out the duplinks in the review below in case you don't want to install.
Early life
edit- Link collarbone fracture and concussion.
Collage career
edit- "Jankowski was a critical part of the Seawolves during their Cinderella run to the 2012 College World Series (CWS)." The source says that he scored 4 hits in the game against Louisiana but doesn't mention him as a critical member. Such a statement needs to be properly backed up.
- Changed to mentioning that he was the leadoff hitter, which is backed up by the source — GhostRiver 22:16, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
Minor league career
edit- Ref 20 cites Twitter. A more reliable source will probably be needed as a backup or replacement.
- Do we know why he was put on the disabled list in his rookie season?
- fractured rib, apparently. Added & linked — GhostRiver 22:16, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
- Ref 32 says he fractured his elbow as well.
- added — GhostRiver 22:16, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
- America East Conference and Baseball America are repeat linked in the 1st and 3rd paragraphs respectively.
San Diego Padres
edit- Philadelphia Phillies repeat linked in the 4th paragraph.
Cincinnati Reds
edit- extra innings and Atlanta Braves both repeat linked here.
Philadelphia Phillies
edit- Philadelphia Phillies and spring training repeat linked.
International career
edit- leadoff hitter has been repeat linked here as well.
Comments
editNot to much to do here. Putting on hold. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 12:57, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
- REDMAN 2019 I believe everything has been addressed. — GhostRiver 22:16, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
- Well done. Will now proceed to pass this as a GA. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 09:05, 9 July 2021 (UTC)