Talk:Trent Frederic
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Theleekycauldron in topic Did you know nomination
Trent Frederic has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: January 2, 2022. (Reviewed version). |
A fact from Trent Frederic appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 22 January 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 06:05, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
Review
editNCAA
edit- The second sentence of the second paragraph feels too long
- Split into two and somewhat reworded to increase active voice.
Professional
edit- Please WL amateur tryout contract to Hockey_contracts#Amateur_tryout
- Done.
- The second sentence doesn't really need two references. You could use Elite Prospects as one reference for both. This can also be applied to the birthday referenced in the early life section and the final sentence of the second paragraph
- Done for the second sentence and birthday, Not done for the final sentence of the second paragraph, because a fine single source is already there
- The first sentence of the third paragraph is too long
- Split into two.
- Please WL 2020_Stanley_Cup_playoffs#Host_cities for "bubble"
- Done.
- The sentence mentioning his fever is too long. You can put a period after
it was difficult for Frederic to find his way back into the lineup
- Done and slightly reworded.
- Maybe mention he was protected by the Bruins in the Seattle expansion draft [1]
- Done.
International play
editwhere the US team thrashed the Czech Republic 9–3.
IDK if the use of thrash is neutral. I also think it is a bit odd to use thrash to describe a 9–3 win as opposed to a 12–1 win.- Reworded.
Awards and honors
edit- The third row (after year) should be titled Ref
- Done. Sometimes other people remove this one /shrug
HickoryOughtShirt?4 Everything has been addressed, except where noted. — GhostRiver 16:48, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 16:25, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
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- ... that National Hockey League player Trent Frederic had a roller rink in his childhood basement that he used to practice his fighting? Source: "Me and my brother, he's three years older than me. My brother is Grant. We had an unfinished basement where we kind of made it into a roller rink type deal. So we used to get into a good amount of fights there," Frederic said.
- ALT1: ... that all three sports Trent Frederic played as a child were coached by former professional athletes? Source: The right coaching is critical for player development at young ages, and Frederic had decorated mentors in multiple sports while growing up in St. Louis. (subscription required)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ala Stanford
Improved to Good Article status by GhostRiver (talk). Self-nominated at 16:13, 3 January 2022 (UTC).
- ALT2 ... that ice hockey player Trent Frederic was coached by former professional athletes in three of his childhood sports? Source: The right coaching is critical for player development at young ages, and Frederic had decorated mentors in multiple sports while growing up in St. Louis. (subscription required) Arbitrarily0 (talk) 15:12, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
- Everything checks out, and ALT1 (and ALT2) is approved. I was able to access the source. I cannot approve ALT0 because Frederic mentions a "roller rink type deal" not a roller rink tout court. But I also think ALT1 is better, although I created ALT2 so that it reads more smoothly. Arbitrarily0 (talk) 15:00, 10 January 2022 (UTC)