Talk:Trichonephila plumipes

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 September 2020 and 17 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Arielfeng.

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Behavioral Ecology Peer Review

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The article was very well written. The information was well-cited and clear. The structure of the article was also great! I went over grammar, put the urbanization category under habitats, and added some hyperlinks. One suggestion I have is putting a map that shows where the spiders have been observed. M.s.w.lee (talk) 02:52, 25 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

This article has been expanded nicely. I added some explanations regarding selection under the "sexual dimorphism" subsection. I also edited grammar and wording. I would suggest expanding on the phylogenetic section. Cjing99 (talk) 17:25, 29 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Very well written article with lots of important information! I just made some grammatical changes and changed some sentence structure to flow better. I also went through and added some more hyperlinks. I also moved around a couple sentences as to make it easier for the reader to find what they are looking for. I would recommend adding some more information regarding the types of prey these spiders consume. Kekaze (talk) 08:31, 1 December 2020 (UTC)Reply