Talk:Tropical Storm Selma (2017)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Nova Crystallis in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 04:53, 3 April 2018 (UTC)Reply


I'll do it later.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:53, 3 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Reference is needed for the first landfall in El Salvador.
Added. TCR is the source of the information. Cooper 22:18, 11 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
Linked. Cooper 22:18, 11 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • TCR should be the ultimate source of data, so the sentence involving 0700 UTC should be changed.
Changed source. Cooper 22:18, 11 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
Actually, the 0700 UTC sentence should be removed and be replaced by what the TCR said.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 22:24, 11 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
Alright, I did that, although did you want only the formation date stated by the TCR or the operational difference as well? Cooper 02:59, 13 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
Only the TCR.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:13, 13 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • Italicize the first mention of Selma in the meteorological history.
Done. Cooper 22:18, 11 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • "weakened into a" into -> to
Done. Cooper 22:18, 11 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • Are there more references that could be used for impact?
Not that I could find, unfortunatley. Cooper 22:18, 11 April 2018 (UTC)Reply