Talk:Trumpet/GA1

GA Review

Hi, I'm sorry to say I've failed this article's GA nomination. There are a few significant issues (see criteria) which need addressing. Namely,

• References - need formatting ({{cite web}} is good)... publisher information, access dates, etc.
  • I'd expect there to be a lot of book references (Google Books at worst) as opposed to some random websites.
  • There are a lot of unsourced statements... random example; the Fingering section.
• Prose and MOS - "A common method book for beginners is the "Walter Beeler Method", and there have been several instruction books written by virtuoso Allen Vizzutti." - books go in italics, not quotation marks, and this sentence needs rewording. This is one random example, not a rule.

Please do renominate when you think the article meets the GA criteria. Good luck, giggy _(:O) 02:26, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

• • • Can you be more specific about the web citations? I don't quite follow. Trumpetrep (talk) 17:59, 17 August 2009 (UTC)