Try Some, Buy Some has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: February 11, 2014. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 15:58, 3 February 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: JG66 (talk)
Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 15:58, 3 February 2014 (UTC)
1: Well-written
- a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Check for WP:LEAD:
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Done
Check for WP:LAYOUT: Done
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Done
Check for WP:WTW: Done
Check for WP:MOSFICT: Done
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Done
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2: Verifiable with no original research
- a. Has an appropriate reference section: Yes
- b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: excellent (Thorough check on Google.)
Done
Check for WP:RS: Done
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Done
Check for inline citations WP:MINREF: Done
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- c. No original research: Done
Done
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3: Broad in its coverage
a. Major aspects:
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Done
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b. Focused:
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Done
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4: Neutral
Done
4. Fair representation without bias: Done
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5: Stable: No edit wars, etc: Yes
6: Images Done (NFC with a valid FUR) & (PD)
Images:
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Done
6: Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: Done
6: Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: Done
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I'm glad to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article:
I think the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview and to give relative emphasis.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. You've done great work, and I am quite happy to assist you in improving it. All the best, --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:39, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
- @JG66: --Seabuckthorn ♥ 15:42, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
- Hi JG66! I hope you are watching this page and have not forgotten about this article. As a gentle reminder, I'm putting the article on hold. I hope you don't mind. All the best! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:58, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
- Ah sorry Seabuckthorn, I thought you'd be watching the article also, but I should have replied here anyway. I've made a few changes there. It's a tough one: I'm thinking some further cuts might be necessary in the main text, and/or I should completely rewrite the lead from scratch … Any thoughts on progress so far would be very welcome! Best, JG66 (talk) 02:04, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
- Hi again. I've done a bit more work on the lead without resorting to the more drastic steps mentioned above. I really think that's all I can do (that is, unless I start deleting points from the main text). I appreciate your patience through all this – what do you think of the lead as it is now? JG66 (talk) 04:34, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks! It's okay, no need to be sorry. You're right. I should watch articles also. Apologies. The lead looks perfect now. Thanks! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 06:49, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you, Seabuckthorn. Great news … (and a fair amount of relief!). It's good to get another one up there. Take care, JG66 (talk) 07:08, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks! It's okay, no need to be sorry. You're right. I should watch articles also. Apologies. The lead looks perfect now. Thanks! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 06:49, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
- Hi JG66! I hope you are watching this page and have not forgotten about this article. As a gentle reminder, I'm putting the article on hold. I hope you don't mind. All the best! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:58, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
Promoting the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 06:49, 11 February 2014 (UTC)