Talk:Typhoon Kent (1992)/GA1
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 01:05, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
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edit- Link Japan in the lead. NoahTalk 01:05, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- I would add #vertical component to the wikilink for wind shear. NoahTalk 01:05, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- But do we know for sure the increase of shear was calculated horizontally? YE Pacific Hurricane 01:21, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- You did say the wind shear was vertical in that sentence, which would mean the vertical component would be involved. NoahTalk 01:24, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- Name of the storm is misspelled. NoahTalk 01:05, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- "A total 1,561 houses were destroyed" Add 'of'. NoahTalk 01:05, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- Fixed twice. YE Pacific Hurricane 01:21, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- "prompted JTWC to issue a Tropical Cyclone Formation Alert at 15:00 UTC on August 5." add 'the' before JTWC. NoahTalk 01:05, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- You probably should include a link to storms of the same name as I do know there is a Typhoon Kent (1995). NoahTalk 01:05, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- Added, good find. YE Pacific Hurricane 01:21, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
Overall, there really wasn't much to point out. NoahTalk 01:05, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
- 2 reviews in a day for me! Thanks! YE Pacific Hurricane 01:21, 30 April 2019 (UTC)