Talk:U.S. Route 11 in Maryland
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Racepacket in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 02:43, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
This is a nice piece of work, but I am placing it on hold so that you can address a few concerns.
- Disamb link: Hager House.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- "constructed in the late 1900s" means 1995. Just say "1909" which is what appears in the History section.
- "crosses Norfolk Southern Railway's Hagerstown District" - what is it? a line? a freight yard?
- Fixed I clarified that it is a rail line. VC 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
- "and immediately crosses the Norfolk Southern rail line again" - at grade?
- Fixed I clarified that the highway crosses over the rail line. VC 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
- "bridge across the Potomac River was rebuilt in 1978 and 1979" should be "bridge across the Potomac River was rebuilt in 1978-79" because it was only rebuilt once.
- Fixed I changed to a single year, 1979, to remove the ambiguity. VC 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
- "For this extension, US 11 was relocated to a tunnel underneath the extended runway in 2006." I assume that when building the tunnel, they did not go back to the original alignment, but kept the curve. Please state one way or the other.
- I rewrote the sentence as follows: "For this extension, US 11 was relocated to a tunnel underneath the extended runway along the curved alignment in 2006." Let me know if that addresses the issue or if you have any further suggestions. VC 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- In route description, clarify that the WVA-MD state line is the south side of the Potomac River, so that the bridge is in Maryland.
- Based on actual signage, it is accurate to say that the junction is with both I-81 and I-70 in the junction table?
- Fixed I checked the signage and I-70 is not included, so I removed the I-70 mention from the Junction list. VC 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
I am putting the article on hold. Thanks, Racepacket (talk) 03:13, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
- I addressed all of your concerns. Please let me know if you have any questions. VC 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
- I went ahead and fixed the link to Hager House. Good work. Congratulations. Racepacket (talk) 21:39, 28 November 2010 (UTC)