Talk:USA for Africa/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Username6892 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Username6892 (talk · contribs) 01:12, 24 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Based on the Good article criteria, this article is not ready for GAN. It does not have a clear lead section as its current lead section contains information not found in other parts of the article, making it far from satisfying Good article criterion 1b. As well, the We Are the World article covers USA for Africa in more detail than this article does. I have not read the entirety of that article, though a good place to start looking for new content are in its humanitarian aid section. If no material is found which would be considered unsuitable to be mentioned in that article, it may be a good idea to merge this article with We Are the World, though that is out of the scope of the Good Article criteria. Given the lack of major topics in that article which are mentioned in this one (particularly regarding the organization's humanitarian activities), I do not think it is close to addressing all main aspects of the topic (criterion 3a). If you would like this article to meet the Good article criteria, please expand the article so it covers all main aspects of the topic and a summary lead can be created.

There are also some sourcing issues:

  • History, cited in the part about Hands Across America, is not a reliable source. (2b)
  • The We Are the World album, Performers, and Legacy sections are mostly or completely uncited. (2c)

I have not checked the article for compliance with the other Good Article criteria as I am quick failing this article. Username6892 01:12, 24 April 2023 (UTC)Reply