Talk:USS New Hampshire (BB-25)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nick2crosby (talk · contribs) 15:36, 14 May 2015 (UTC)

User:Nick2crosby review

I think that this should become a good article because I feel that it fits the criteria on the scale. There is enough evidence for I, as a viewer, to understand fully, and thoroughly what the USS New Hampshire is all about.

• As a more experienced reviewer, I've been asked for my comments by the nominator. I'll get to them shortly and the review should not be marked as completed until then.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:13, 20 May 2015 (UTC)
• External links OK, no DABs.
• Why is there a do not transfer to Commons for the line drawing? Images otherwise appropriately licensed.
  • I think that's auto-generated by the {{PD-US-1923-abroad}} template.
• Why fractional feet in main body, but feet and inches in infobox? Prefer the latter.
  • Dunno, but fixed now.
• Be sure to put conversions to metric measurement to nearest whole digit "|0". And you've got at least one duplicate conversion.
  • Should be good now
• This reads awkwardly: United States occupation of Veracruz Either "American occupation..." or delete United States entirely.
  • Seems fine to omit the United States entirely.
• Heroica Escuela Naval Militar academy Translate this.
  • Done
• What do you mean "slipped"? If the propeller fell off, say so more clearly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:43, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Thanks for taking care of the review. Parsecboy (talk) 18:21, 30 May 2015 (UTC)