Talk:Ugly (Fantasia song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:04, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
I'm actually pretty familiar with Fantasia so I'll take this one up.
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
Initial comments
edit- I don't think the "For other uses" tab is necessary since "Ugly (Fantasia song)" is pretty specific enough
- Makes sense; removed. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- Link "Brentwood" in the infobox 'studio' parameter
- Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- You should include that 19 Recordings and RCA handled the release in the lead
- Added. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- Perhaps you'd like to add the years to After Midnight?
- Sorry, forgot about this comment. Added the year in which she appeared in the musical as that is the most relevant part. Aoba47 (talk) 21:35, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- Should R&B be added as a genre? It seems like a lot of critics are making the comparison
- Added. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- I don't think you need to link "So Blue" since it just redirects to The Definition Of...
- Makes sense. Removed. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- Ref #11 has the author's name spelt differently than how it appears in the text "Mcpherson" vs "Macpherson"
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- "described it as an improvement to her previous single "No Time for It" (2016)." --> The way this is set up makes it sound like "Ugly" was released as a commercial single too when it was just promo; I'd just say "improvement to her single"
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- I would archive Ref #21 since sometimes iTunes removes non-singles for whatever reason
- Archived. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
- I'm not so sure that #22 is reliable enough for inclusion here; what do you think?
- Removed from "Reception" section and replaced in the other instances. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
Well written and sourced. Ping me with any questions. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 21:04, 28 August 2017 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: Thank you! I am actually really proud of this article. I have addressed all of your comments. I am looking forward to your feedback. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)