Talk:Unbroke

Latest comment: 3 months ago by Wfoj3 in topic confusing sentance

confusing sentance

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"album examines Evans' strained relationship with her father following his divorce from her mother, and how this informed her relationship to Barker." seems awkward wording to me. Recommend revision. My wild guess - simple - remove "Informed" replace with "Affected". There is probably even a better rewrite than my suggestion. Wfoj3 (talk) 13:51, 9 June 2024 (UTC)Reply