Talk:Underground World Home/GA1

Latest comment: 9 months ago by Kencf0618 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:06, 15 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:06, 15 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • File:Underground World Home living room.png Read the brochure more carefully; this is a photo of the house in Colorado removed and replaced with floor plan
  • I'll have to trust you that the Plainview Herald's copyright was not renewed
  • The brochure is out of copyright and I want to see the floor plan in lieu of the living room. I'd also like to see photos of the actual interior of this house if you can find them. I added the floor plan, regarding the interior photos, I have done a fairly comprehensive search for free images without success. I will keep searching
  • The written description of the house really needs to supplemented with the floor plan. I'd also suggest cutting the room sizes. I added the floor plan
  • Who is Mrs. Glenn Smith? If she's not notable, I suggest dropping her name.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:26, 26 March 2023 (UTC) I dropped her name from the article. Bruxton (talk) 18:44, 31 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
Texas mural artist. She's cited, so she's included. kencf0618 (talk) 00:51, 21 January 2024 (UTC)Reply