Talk:Underground media in German-occupied Europe
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editI would put more links to other Wikipedia articles in your article. For example, you could include a link to Joseph Goebbels and then maybe remove the fact that he was the Minister of Propaganda. Eventually I would also add pictures and visuals to make the article even better but good job so far! KLK1130 (talk)
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edithttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dutch_resistance#Organization
hope these help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rlira123 (talk • contribs) 20:42, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
Nice topic
editA very nice topic. I added a section on Poland. See more at Polish_culture_during_World_War_II#Print. You'll find Category:Resistance publications of World War II by country helpful, too. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:01, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
Peer Review by Jake Smith
editI really like the way you have this stuff organized by country. It's a lot easier to read and understand, and I feel like its probably easier for you to write it this way. There are some links in here where you keep linking them, where you only need to do the first one (example= Vichy). Also maybe think about adding some info on the effects that the propaganda may have or something along those lines. You do a really good job as to what the propaganda or underground media is, but maybe just a little more on why this is important and the implications it had on the war and nazi-europe. Jakdsmith (talk) 17:38, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
Peer Review by Nick Barry
editThis is a great article so far on a very interesting topic. Neutrality is not an issue and your organization makes it very easy to understand and follow. The writing is clear and concise and other than a little more information needed everything looks good. One other possible suggestion would be to maybe try and find some pictures or examples of the underground media publications.Nbarry14 (talk) 02:38, 27 April 2015 (UTC)