Talk:Unidentified Anomalous Phenomena Disclosure Act

Undue credulity

The article is written rather credulously as though there is anything plausible about "biological material" and "non-human intelligence". The fact that this stuff is so WP:FRINGE as to be eye-rolled at by the relevant scientific community is an important point to get across to readers and the article does not sufficiently do that. Please fix prior to removing the tag. jps (talk) 15:57, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Added a fringe tag, to warn readers of the undue credence the article gives UFO rumors. Allan Nonymous (talk) 15:58, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

What undue credence after those edits by you from the intial draft? Is a Federal law itself 'fringe'? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 16:13, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

The fact the article takes at face value claims that the US government had in its possession alien material/technology. Allan Nonymous (talk) 16:16, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Apologies, could you point out where it says that now after your edit of that one bit of verbiage in the lede that I based on the actual raw language in the legislation itself from the source?

The Background section doesn't say this and is based completely on content from the other stable articles. The UAP Disclosure Act section/lede is just straight from sources and about introduction of the bill and two overview/summary sentences from sources and the note of an alternative proposal. The Review Board and NARA sections are just secondary sourced about the two main components of the law. The voting/passage section is just what happened in Congress with the law, and the Reactions section is just that, quotes from stakeholders in Congress and similar.

It seemed like it would be a violation of WP:NPOV to insert any of my own judgement into the veracity of it all, so I just tried to spell out the facts about the law itself. It's not an article on UFOs/aliens, it's about a law? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 16:22, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

The article as currently written does not sufficiently frame the subject which is, facilely, a giant hypothetical and a nearly laughable one at that. jps (talk) 00:44, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Whether or not its hypothetical or laughable (I do not disagree), our individual/personal views don't really matter, right? WP:OR. The subject of the article, which I will politely repeat no matter how many times contested, is the law known as the "Unidentified Anomalous Phenomena Disclosure Act", not aliens and such. Reality is not presently subjective, surely. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 02:28, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

This is not an individual/personal view. This is simply what the subject is. jps (talk) 13:06, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

The subject of the article, again, is a WP:GNG compliant subset of Pub. L. 118–31 (text) (PDF), no matter how many times it comes up. This is not the article on UFOs or little green men. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:23, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

If you think this law has notability that goes beyond the UFO cult, I don't think you've appreciated why we haven't nominated it for deletion. jps (talk) 01:07, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

"undue credence the article gives UFO rumors"

Huh? The article is merely reporting actions in the US Congress. KHarbaugh (talk) 17:12, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Not really. The only action of Congress being reported is the voting. I do not see much reporting on the drafting, for example. jps (talk) 00:31, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

There is basically no news on the 'drafting' that I have found past the limited discussion of David Grusch having input on the legislation from his role in the Intelligence community. The law seems to have basically burst forward full speed from the United States Senate Select Committee on Intelligence as far as I can tell; it apparently went directly from a sensitive compartmented information facility to the United States Senate chamber. Which is fine, and doesn't really matter, but it would be nice to turn up a few reputable mainstream sources covering this. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 02:30, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I think that the lack of coverage may say something about whether this is just the equivalent of a stale hot potato of an issue. There was a brief excitement over Grusch's testimony, but it turned into a lot of nothing and now the hastily drafted "act" is not of interest to anyone but the most unreliable of commentators. jps (talk) 13:05, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I think that the lack of coverage may say something about whether this is just the equivalent of a stale hot potato of an issue.'

It--the UAPDA--has been consistently in the mainstream news for one year now, and NARA is forcing compliance from government agencies already. My, and your, personal views on the law are not even really tertiary. That says it is of interest to the United States of America's Federal government, because the United States Congress and United States President said it was, so we report that. Scientists perhaps can complain about the law, but that doesn't change that it exists, and from trivial if not Article-level inclusion today sources still show them going on about it. I followed more by that Matt Laslo DC reporter after reading the now-redudandant source of his that we removed, to see if there was anything worth adding here (still looking!). I have to admit a remark from the South Dakota Senator made me frankly curious, where he said the repeated inclusion of the term "non-human" was "no accident". Why?

Beats me, but they obviously think it's important, and it was important enough to pass a law which is heavily sourced, so that's where we are. Where we'll end up is TBD, but that's not a concern for today's Wikipedia article. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 14:56, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

No one in the mainstream news has really cared that much about this stuff. That's the entire point. It's all niche bloviating from lazy reporters and cultists as far as I can tell. jps (talk) 18:10, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I don't how to say this without saying it, but noted, and not relevant as one persons take. Nominate it for deletion if you think it fails WP:GNG and you can stop saying this sort of thing repeatedly, because repetition does not really influence anything. Let's focus on article content and sources against policy. Our personal views on the subject matter as little as we do, on Wikipedia. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:25, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Facts matter. The fact that this law is based on pseudoscience makes WP:FRINGE relevant. jps (talk) 01:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

My dear sir,

the article accurately reports actions taken by the US Congress.

That is not a rumor, but reality. KHarbaugh (talk) 11:59, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

The article is about the law, its background, development, politics and passage, not the topic of UFOs or "Ufology", surely. By all means edit along those lines for WP:NPOV! With the few edits by User:Allan Nonymous what remains that has NPOV concerns against the listed sources? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 16:12, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

You think a law about UFOs is not within the topic of UFOs or ufology? How so? jps (talk) 00:32, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I didn't say that; I said the article Unidentified Anomalous Phenomena Disclosure Act is about the law called the Unidentified Anomalous Phenomena Disclosure Act. I will require/need to know what specific actionable passages/sources in the article are a WP:NPOV concern if I am to remediate them against policy. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 00:42, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

We could start with whether and how the act defines a non-human intelligence. Or extraterrestrial biological material. Any sources discuss that? If no, maybe we shouldn't highlight that less-considered part of the statute? jps (talk) 00:45, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I've adjusted it already to focus on the legalities around it all if this is concerning; see the lede now. I am fine with this! Like I said, this is an article about a law, not aliens. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 02:32, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Context still seems a bit difficult to suss out here. How did concepts which have no precedent in jurisprudence end up in the text? What are we supposed to do with a law that talks about things which are not clearly defined and which the sponsors of the bill have admitted in interviews might not exist at all? I mean, Gillibrand when walking back some of her more credulous commentary more-or-less said that she was concerned that paranoid conspiracy theories could be rooted in the Defense Department. Stuff like this is absent from the article because, well, this provision is so unimportant to everyone but the UFO true believer. jps (talk) 13:03, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

What are we supposed to do with a law that talks about things which are not clearly defined and which the sponsors of the bill have admitted in interviews might not exist at all?

Report what the sources say and leave it at that? We're not supposed to insert ourselves, I thought...? As to how it got there, we can chatter about it (and as a law/science nerd, law a bit more, it's fascinating as hell how this ran from SCIF to law and so fast. Congress does not do things by accident of this scale, to where a Senate Majority Leader and the entire Senate Intel committee drops a bomb like this. I don't know why you keep bringing up your personal views and takes on UFO believers, enthusiasts and such. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 14:50, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I haven't seen any sources that discuss these matters. As such, I don't think we have anything to go on but inexact claims and nonsensical verbiage. "Congress does not do things by accident of this scale" is a total joke. They do things by accident at this scale all the time. jps (talk) 18:09, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I am not here to socialize or pontificate. I'm here to improve Wikipeda, and certainly not to 'right wrongs'. Do you have any policy-based things to add? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:27, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I think that your "policy basis" pleading has gotten tiresome. The policies have been outlined for you plenty. Now is the time to try to bring the article to heel in compliance and stop it behaving as a coatrack. jps (talk) 01:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

Do you have any sources I can integrate from mainstream scientific sourcing about the UAPDA? I'd be happy to integrate what you have. I spent a few hours running searches on all these related terms and came across nothing science-related that I remember seeing about the laws outside of things like forums, subreddits and similar. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 16:24, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

"The article is written rather credulously as though there is anything plausible about "biological material" and "non-human intelligence". "

Of course that is plausible.

I don't know if it is true,

but there is no reasonable reason to reject its possibility. KHarbaugh (talk) 16:49, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Yes, there are such reasons. You just do not know them. --Hob Gadling (talk) 20:44, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Please state them. KHarbaugh (talk) 12:18, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Special relativity. All stars are far away, and light velocity is maximum. Therefore it is extremely unlikely that beings from another star system are here. The planets in our star system are uninhabitable. The evidence for alien visitation is all crap.

But that is neither here nor there. It is not our job to say "there is no reasonable reason" and conclude that nonsense belongs in the article. UFOs are fringe, and the people who look at fringe do not believe that alien stuff. --Hob Gadling (talk) 11:04, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

Please see

List of nearest stars.

I have no idea whether beings from those systems have visited Earth.

But that, IMO, is certainly a possibility.

Nothing credulous about that possibility. KHarbaugh (talk) 11:39, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

Still neither here nor there. Read WP:NOTFORUM and [1].

Whether you have any idea and whether it is "possible" in your opinion is not relevant. See WP:OR.

The claim that "aliens are on Earth" is "plausible" is totally fringe. Whether it is "possible" is irrelevant - it is "possible" that Santa brings presents to everybody if you bend over backwards, and it is equally "possible" that aliens are visiting us.

You are trying to base the article on your own preconceptions instead on how reliable scientific sources are treating the subject. --Hob Gadling (talk) 15:37, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

"You are trying to base the article on your own preconceptions instead on how reliable scientific sources are treating the subject."

The article, as currently written, is about a law duly passed by Congress and signed by the president.

Stop. KHarbaugh (talk) 15:56, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

I'm not certain how any of our views on "aliens" matter on Wikipedia in general, as our views don't matter for article content, only our policies and sources? We have "WP:FORUM" linked up there. Let's focus on article text and sources. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 02:50, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Posted for follow up on WP:FRINGE noticeboard

Hey all, thanks for the help. I'm honestly stuck how to proceed here as I seem to have exhausted all sources about what this article is about, and do not see a solution to the asks on the attached new templates. I raised a question here:

• : Wikipedia:Fringe theories/Noticeboard#Unidentified Anomalous Phenomena Disclosure Act, NPOV, FRINGE and UNDUE

You guys have me scratching my head how this would be addressed without utilizing WP:Original Research or the WP:COATRACK approach. Thanks for opening up this new class of policy pages to me; I wasn't aware of a few of these. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 20:06, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Please VPP, do not continue to open up discussions on multiple places. This article is only a few days old, the talk page discussion is from September 16 and already you have opened up a discussion on fringe theories on September 16. The same people are having a conversation in two different places and we should always try to contain the conversation FIRST on the talk page of the article under question. And it can take weeks to get answers and an agreement to move forward. You have questions and are frustrated not to get quick responses, I get that, I also have that personality to move along and finish tasks before starting the next one. But this is confusing to people who would like to discuss this issue. Once the discussions start getting multiple responses then it is hard to remember where you read something or who to respond to or what was the point of the topic you were trying to make. VPP you did this also with the Luis Elizondo article and I asked you please not start multiple conversations in various places and yet you are doing so again. Please be patient, it only frustrates people who are attempting to answer your questions. I do not have an opinion on this article at the moment, am following the discussions and hope there is a clear answer of how to move forward. Kudos for remaining a VeryPolitePerson. Sgerbic (talk) 02:57, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Thanks. The Elizondo thing was a WP:BLP matter which I had seen was subject to not worrying about "local" consensus due to it's real-world impacts on living people. I respectfully do not regret asking for eyes on that scenario as it unfolded, as multiple people were putting negative unsourced material in there.

My initial frustration here was the (to me) strange extreme vagueness about the "NPOV" concerns. If someone has an issue, they should be prepared to explain it in detail, upfront, from the initial engagement. That's what I try to do at all times. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 03:00, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I totally get that VPP. I find editing frustrating at times and getting a clear answer with chapter and verse is not always going to happen. I've learned that you sometimes have to take a step back when dealing with some topics and say maybe I'm not getting the full picture here. I will substitute a different but peer name/article in place of the one I'm working on and think it though that way. For example, this is about a law, yep that seems like it would be something that would be Wikipedia notable. But is it? Does this specific law stand out from other laws? If so is there enough reliable sources to back that up? And from different opinions, people who should be experts. What are some laws that have passed but have not been in the public and getting those important reliable sources, probably a ton of them, we don't know about them because the media hasn't written about them. As I said here in the post above. Keep discussions to one place so that everyone will have one discussion and we can sort these out. I understand your frustration, you have done a lot of work and it might just be all deleted, been there and done that. This is how we learn. Sgerbic (talk) 03:08, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I see not a single issue with notability here against any verbiage of any policy anyone has linked here or on the Fringe page, being bluntly and transparently honest. I have asked as well repeatedly for this apparently mythical policy that says some articles (which?) require specific classes/types of resources (which?) for notability beyond any other article (why?) and all I have apparently gotten is crickets. We have a year of unique mainstream news media discussion of this law, over dozens of sources. I get some people... are passionate about this 'sort' of topic, but passion is irrelevant as is ego, right? I was just a bit flabbergasted to see someone on the other venue straight up make up what amounts to disinformation that this article is all OR, primary sourced, and fringe sourced.... which is patently untrue per UAPDA#References. I truly don't see any policy-level issues with this policy, and no one can cite what there is specifically like that. Every response seems to be a new acronym, and trivial reading of each shows this article is 'fine'.

Asking genuinely: are we supposed to worry about or consider the personalities of others editing as to what gets on the Article page, or only our policies? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 03:14, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

You have not gotten crickets. You just didn't like the WP:FRINGE policy or didn't understand what we are saying. jps (talk) 13:07, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I think it's a fine policy; I don't care for vague silliness or acronyms as answers. The level of sourcing in this article would make any other article on any other topic virtually a lifetime resident of Wikipedia. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 13:35, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

We aren't talking about any other article on any other topic. WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. jps (talk) 18:08, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Again, because there is no need for the same discussion to happen repeatedly -- I encourage you to nominate this article for deletion if you think it's not notable. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:11, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Agree with VPP in all respects. The article, in my view, covers a notable law that has considerable sourcing. Those who disagree should nominate it for deletion. The tags, again in my view, should be removed. Jusdafax (talk) 04:04, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

Tags don't worry me, but I'm inclined to believe notability _is_ met. Lots of bad sourcing, lots of work to do but we do need to help readers get to the bottom of this topic, as best we can. This law reminds me of the mathematician who learned about Euler's Identity who said something like: 'I don't understand it, I don't know what means, but it means something.' Maybe it just means whole swaths of the US govt are falling for the UFO CT, and we've handled that before with Qanon and climate denial. Feoffer (talk) 07:18, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

That's how I see this as someone who tends to closely follow topics around classification, if it wasn't obvious from my focus areas. It's basically a law that says if this class of things or types of life do in fact exist, then the government is now compelled to apparently tell everyone and they aren't eligible to be as easily classified. To any sane metric or standard, that is an objectively good thing that we have any additional law that carves holes or limits our ability to over-classify everything under the sun. I do not even see this article the more I think about it as WP:FRINGE and think that needs to be carefully considered. The law makes no statement that "aliens are real!" -- Very Polite Person (talk) 14:28, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

The fact that you think it possible to cavalierly state "class of things or types of life" as though this is at all comprehensible outside of the UFO cults is hard for me to parse. We don't have definitions that mean anything and so the law's entire claim to notoriety is based on pseudoscientific argle-bargle. jps (talk) 01:04, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

"Does this specific law stand out from other laws?"

Absolutely.

There is great (I don't think that is an exaggeration) interest in this issue.

Far more than in many other laws.

The law, passed by Congress and signed by the President,

is an attempt to get some answers on what, if anything, the government knows on this subject.

VPP has done a great job of stating relevant facts about the law.

We should thank him. KHarbaugh (talk) 14:17, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

Important topic, problematic text

As others have said, lots of problems here with tone, credulity, quotefarm, and others. It's written from a background of UFO conspiracy theories, rather than the more relevant, if mundanely-Earthly, 2023 Chinese balloon incident where a foreign spy-platform traversed the nation unreported. Feoffer (talk) 03:58, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

The 'conspiracy' thing most definitely was not my intention; my articles are very dry (I think!) that I have written. I'm not really super familiar with this mess, or wasn't until starting on it after following breadcrumbs from a WP:BLP rescue/research deep dive on Luis Elizondo a few weeks ago (it was the source, now gone, that mentioned Elizondo had influenced the UAPDA) which made me realize there was no article for this. I guess it may have 'read' that way to some people from just hewing almost Xerox-close to the raw sourcing.

Re quotefarm, isn't that most 'reaction' sections on most articles? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 04:40, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

The problem is that this topic in particular attracts a certain type of unreliable source which has all the gloss and veneer of legitimacy while actually hiding behind a complete absence of editorial care. This has plagued even erstwhile "reliable" and "mainstream" outlets like The New York Times and The Washington Post who alternately pass on factchecking and careful reporting in favor exposure then burning the bridges to the Blumenthals and the Keans when the heat in the kitchen gets too hot. We're stuck dealing with a list of compromised, second-rate reporting from the perspective of ludicrous credulity while the rest of the world basically ignores the situation due to its absurdity. jps (talk) 12:57, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Is this your opinion or something backed by policy that any sourcing related to UFOs, even if covering factual things the government is doing, require a different level of scrutiny? Is this a neutral encyclopedia or are some animals more special? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 13:33, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

WP:FRINGE definitely requires a different level of scrutiny. I don't know why you seem to foreget that so often. jps (talk) 18:07, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Your rhetoric:

"burning the bridges"

"the heat in the kitchen"

"ludicrous credulity"

"absurdity"

This is the level of your rhetoric.

And in the past,

"brains rolling around the floor". KHarbaugh (talk) 15:07, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Do you have a point that will help us improve the article? jps (talk) 18:07, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Do you have to use perjoratives repeatedly like cited here? Is civility a mandate on all of us at all times? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:12, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Are you upset by any of these descriptions? If so, does it prevent you from collaborating? jps (talk) 18:13, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Civility is apparently not optional. Please desist from being abusive or insulting toward any parties going forward. I look forward to working with you on this article and expect your tone to stay as respectful and polite as mine. Let's move forward without any 'hot takes'. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:16, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Do we know the vote tallies? Can we find any statements from opponents of the bill, people calling it nonsense, etc. Feoffer (talk) 04:26, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Getting into those Congressional weeds was still on my to-do, I can dig it out tomorrow or the day after I should think. I don't recall seeing any negative Congressional commentary in any WP:RS level stuff. I am assuming Twitter and similar won't count, even if I found something? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 04:37, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I just notice the vote counts are in the sidebar. We'd prefer in a RS, but we have some latitude since we're balancing fringe -- Mick West or other famous skeptics twitter would probably work. Feoffer (talk) 04:40, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I don't think we should use "socials"; the skeptic folk have an entire ecosystem of for-profit and non-profit publications I can look through as well. We just need to make sure any commentary or criticism is about the law, not 'little green men'. Or else (to me) that would read like putting critiques of Scientology spiritual or whatever religious beliefs into something like Headley v. Church of Scientology International, which would be obviously inappropriate. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 04:42, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Definitely a bit of an WP:ARSEHOLES problem at the moment. I mean, who care if Jim Semivan (who?) think a revlation could be coming that "we are not alone"? Having a real expert like West could help de-fringe-ify things. Bon courage (talk) 05:06, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I mean, who care if Jim Semivan (who?) think a revlation could be coming that "we are not alone"?

USA Today determined this CIA veteran was notable enought to quote as an expert on it? Mick West is quoted now too. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 15:00, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Why should it matter if USA Today thought this CIA veteran (seriously, why does that matter?) thought someone was notable enough. Does he have expertise in these matters? We need more context. jps (talk) 18:12, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I will instruct you to provide what policy says we now apparently need contextual framing/sourcing for... sourcing? Explain yourself in plain English, please. Thanks. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:17, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Here's the plain English: there is no reason to think that USA Today provides decent commentary on technical subjects of this sort. jps (talk) 01:00, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

For my part, I'd say Semivan is a proponent of the full UFO CT, making him a convenient person to quote for that POV. There are any number of people we could replace him with -- Elizondo, Danny Sheehan, I could go on literally forever. Feoffer (talk) 07:03, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

What is "CT" in this context? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 23:31, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

It's a valid question, right? To me, CT is perpetuating the full "Aliens are Real" with all that it entails: telepathy, grays, abductions, implants, etc. In contrast, quite a lot of people in government are having non-FRINGE conversations about balloons, drones, and other objects moving in ways we can't precisely explain. Feoffer (talk) 00:31, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

I think CT=conspiracy theory. Schazjmd (talk) 14:03, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

National Review and Andrew Stuttaford

The article uses this fellow like this in the Reactions section:

In National Review, Andrew Stuttaford[unreliable source?] criticized the usage of eminent domain in the UAPDA, arguing that while there may be legitimate reasons to restrict access to "recovered technologies" subject to Second Amendment considerations, he opposed eminent domain for non-weapons technologies, saying that without private property, technologies such as hydraulic fracturing could not have advanced had landowners not controlled their own mineral rights.[34]

The citation there links to this National Review piece by Stuttaford, "UFOs and Eminent Domain".

National Review itself:

• https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:LinkSearch&limit=50000&offset=0&target=nationalreview.com

Out of the first 5k hits, a total of 1987 are for "talk:" pages, and 431 are from "Wikipedia:" pages. 312 are "User:", but I didn't differentiate for User vs User talk and so on, so conservatively 2106 aren't from articles, and the rest are as sources. The breakouts on the next 5k results are similar, so presumably we've got at minimum 4000 usages of National Review as a source in Articles. From WP:NATIONALREVIEW it seems fine to use in our context here as background/analysis on one specific aspect (eminent domain) for the UAPDA.

Going by this for Andrew Stuttaford:

• https://www.google.com/search?q=%22Andrew+Stuttaford%22+site%3Aen.wikipedia.org

He is cited as a source on Bridge of Spies (book), Fairy painting, Walter Duranty, Mister Sterling, Ricardo Tubbs, and Philip Michael Thomas. The National Review lists him as:

Andrew Stuttaford has been writing for National Review since the early 1990s. He took up full-time positions with National Review and National Review Institute in March 2020 and is now the editor of National Review Capital Matters, an initiative focused on financial and economic coverage.

Prior to joining National Review and National Review Institute, Andrew, who qualified as an attorney in the U.K., worked in the international financial markets for nearly four decades, latterly as the CEO of the U.S. subsidiary of a Nordic investment bank. Andrew has written for a wide range of publications over the years including The Wall Street Journal, The New Criterion, The Weekly Standard, and Standpoint on political, economic, and cultural matters.

Does this qualify as a reliable source to speak to questions of eminent domain against new technologies or is there a policy-based reason to retain the [unreliable source?] tagging? If we wish to retain that, based on what specific passage from what specific policy, with a link to same? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 15:40, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

What's the point of quoting the National Review? Does this conservative ideological mouthpiece have any special insight into the UFO cults in Washington? If so, why? jps (talk) 00:59, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

Bloomberg News and Tyler Cowen

• Tyler Cowen
• Bloomberg News

We use Cowen like this:

Tyler Cowen, writing for Bloomberg News, argued meanwhile to exercise caution and that the government may have valid and legitimate reasons to maintain secrecy around the topics of UFOs, UAP, and non-human intelligence.[33]

The citation goes to his Bloomberg piece titled Government Secrecy About UFOs Isn't Always a Bad thing. Using this version here as the Bloomberg side version is basically broken now (was working the other day).

From Cowen's own Wikipedia article:

Tyler Cowen ... is an American economist, columnist, and blogger. He is a professor at George Mason University, where he holds the Holbert L. Harris chair in the economics department.

Is there any reason this person here in this context is an unreliable source? If so, why and against what policy? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 15:52, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I removed the tag yesterday (no one seemed to object still) on this one as it seems this person is fine as a WP:RS to discuss this broad remark here/analysis. I am happy to hear why we may not want this in under the WP:RULES -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:31, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

How is Tyler Cowen an expert on anything relating to UFOs, UAP, and non-human intelligence? jps (talk) 00:58, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

Dave Troy, Washington Spectator, and WP:NOTRS

This is in the "Reactions to the 2024 UAPDA" section here:

In the Washington Spectator, Dave Troy[better source needed] compared the UAPDA's gated time limits to an "ultimatum" for President Joe Biden to release classified data.[26]

The citation goes to Troy's article The Wide Angle: Is a UFO Hoax a Ticking Time-bomb for Biden?.

Author Dave Troy there is flagged as needing a "better" source per WP:NOTRS, which states:

• Questionable sources are those that have a poor reputation for checking the facts, lack meaningful editorial oversight, or have an apparent conflict of interest.

There is no evidence I can find online of any concerns of fact checking from any reputable sources for either Dave Troy or Washington Spectator. The newspaper actually rates HIGH for Factual Reporting and HIGH CREDIBILITY for MBFC rating per Media Bias/Fact Check. For the Spectator, it's published and editor Hamilton Fish V is actually himself notable on Wikipedia, and there are no noted concerns on fact checking/editorial. There is no conflict of interest here--with whom, in any event? Aliens? Congress?

• Such sources include websites and publications expressing views widely considered by other sources to be promotional, extremist, or relying heavily on unsubstantiated gossip, rumor, or personal opinion. Questionable sources should be used only as sources for material on themselves, such as in articles about themselves; see below. They are not suitable sources for contentious claims about others.

Not applicable here.

• Predatory open access journals are considered questionable due to the absence of quality control in the peer-review process.

Not applicable here.

Why do we need a better source for a high level summary analysis like this? By what policy standard and section of said policy? -- Very Polite Person (talk) 16:40, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

It should be obvious to the reader why we are sourcing things to specific individuals. I have removed all those quotes and opinions by non-lawmakers given that it is hard to see their relevance to the law itself. jps (talk) 00:57, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

UAPDA definition of 'Non-human intelligence'

https://www.democrats.senate.gov/imo/media/doc/uap_amendment.pdf

Non-human intelligence.--The term "non-human intelligence" means any sentient intelligent non-human lifeform regardless of nature or ultimate origin that may be presumed responsible for unidentified anomalous phenomena or of which the Federal Government has become aware.

It's on page 6. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 16:56, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Is a chimpanzee sentient? Do they cause anomalous phenomena? How do we know?

This is not a definition. This is joke.

jps (talk) 18:05, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

I don't disagree, but we are irrelevant in our personal takes. We follow where the sourcing and policy leads. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:10, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Also, note that no secondary reliable sources has commented on this attempt to say aliens without saying aliens. I don't think this term deserves mentioning on this page. jps (talk) 18:06, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Hold on, you were the one who put the "specify" template there in the first place with this edit. You also complained on the discussions that readers had no context for "non-human intelligence". Your concerns have been addressed. Our goalposts should be firmly glued down. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 18:09, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

?How have my concerns been addressed? What is non-human intelligence? jps (talk) 15:12, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

The relevant question is not

how VPP would define "non-human intelligence",

but how the subject of the article, UAPDA, defines it.

VPP quoted UAPDA's definition at the beginning of this section. KHarbaugh (talk) 15:40, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

They didn't define it. They passed the buck. jps (talk) 20:13, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

As jps says -- without coverage in a RS, it's really impossible for us to know what that definition means, what effects it will have (if any), or how to weight it. Bureaucracies are funny things, and their words aren't straightforward to interpret. In any case, we certainly can't go from a definition in a bill to any broader claims: aliens can't be legislated into existence. Feoffer (talk) 06:50, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

We are not required to hyper-contextualize everything. We have a conundrum here as the law and remarks specifically talk about 'non-human'. I'm 100% fine with leaving that bit commented out, but if we can't quote the law that itself has it's own definition of 'non-human', and we cannot by any metric exclude the text string 'non-human' from the article because the law explicitly addresses it and has commanded NARA to take an all-of Federal government action in that collection effort, we can't pretend it doesn't exist in deference to any (I don't know how to term this so I just need to say it) 'delicate' WP:FRINGE sensibilities, or their apparent counterparts who want to write like aliens are holding rallies at the United Nations or something.

It needs to be asked and answered: are we not supposed to talk about when the media starts covering things like "Why is the US Senate holding confirmation hearings for a UFO committee that the US President nominated?" We have a guideline (not policy) conflict here between something that is notable and the desire by Wikipedia to limit exposure to certain things on-wiki given there's (I regret looking at those "Arbcom" dumpster fires last night) a long history of apparently dickheads brawling in every conceivable direction (including the pro and anti UFO sides) in this subspace for seemingly an entire human generation on this site.

Like most of you, I hope no one normal wants to spend all day arguing over stupid repeated micro-debates about a stray vowel or syllable and wants to get a stable article and move on to more interesting things.

So it seems like our options here are:

1. Just leave the few token mentions of "non-human" as is, and call it a day until UAPDA 2024 moves forward or not to whatever end. This article as-is may be simply done and stable now once we tune the Reactions section more.
2. Uncomment that bit and leave it as-is to give readers context, or we can leave them to read the law.
3. I can stick that quote into the References section as a unique ref name/cite object and we call it a day and bury the definition in the footnotes.

I am fine with any of 1-3. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 14:39, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

Here's an option: remove all mention of non-human intelligence as it has garnered no reliable sources that have discussed it. jps (talk) 15:14, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

"we certainly can't go from a definition in a bill to any broader claims"

You are absolutely right on that.

Please don't read too much into the language in the bill. KHarbaugh (talk) 16:58, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

We should stick explicitly to WP:RS and WP:V for what gets in. We don't need side distractions. "Just the facts, ma'am," and all. -- Very Polite Person (talk) 17:06, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

"aliens can't be legislated into existence"

People seem to forget, or ignore, that the UAPDA is a conditional:

"IF A, THEN B"

The validity of such a conditional

says nothing about the validity of its hypothesis, A. KHarbaugh (talk) 16:27, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

Since the act does not explain what constitutes evidence, it assumes that such evidence is self-evident. It legislates the recognition of such evidence into existence. jps (talk) 20:15, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

Feoffer, in the description he provided to his deletion of the actual language in the UAPDA, wrote

"we can't just pull quotes out of the bill ourselves"

In fact, Wikipedia does that regularly.

See, for example,

Title I of the Patriot Act KHarbaugh (talk) 09:31, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for alerting me to the problems over at Title I of the Patriot Act. I've added tags to alert editors there that the article needs better sourcing. Feoffer (talk) 23:55, 18 September 2024 (UTC)