Talk:Unruhe

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:17, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• "The X-Files television series" to "the American science fiction television series The X-Files"
• "premiered" to "originally aired"
• Only link Monster-of-the-Week, without the "" quote marks
• Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen rating per WP:UNDERLINK
• "in its initial" grammar fail, please change "in" to "upon"
• "Mulder and Scully investigate features a man who kidnaps women and lobotomizes them" that's confusing, "investigate features"
• "Scully being kidnapped" huh, that isn't explain in plot summary above also in the lede, second paragraph
• "Pruitt Taylor Vince" should be referred to by last name after first mention per WP:MOS. Same goes for others in the article.
• Also, unlink it, as its first link is above, see WP:OVERLINK
• "Traverse City, Michigan" two separate links
• Per WP:TVPLOT, the plot is too long, remove some unneeded details in plot, that aren't important to the subject really
• "FBI agents" above it says there are "special agents", note it there too
• "One of the books featured Howard Unruh, the first modern mass murderer" check your grammar
• Move image in broadcast and reception further down on left, or to right side, as per MOS:IMAGELOCATION
• Why does it say the episode earned a "Nielsen household rating" in lede, but it just says "Nielsen rating" in broadcast and reception
• "The X-Files Wiki" The X-Files needs to be in italics
• Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order

Overall; good job. Once the above issues are addressed, I'll pass the article, based on the good article criteria. TBrandley 20:26, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Fixed prose issues, reduced size of plot summary cleared up some things that weren't clear like Scully being kidnapped, moved image, etc. etc. here. Thanks for the quick review(s). Bruce Campbell (talk) 01:59, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

No problem, looks good now. I've passed the article. TBrandley 04:22, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

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