Talk:Until It Beats No More/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 22:30, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• No issues

Lead

• No issues

Background

• No issues

Music and lyrics

• According to WP:SAMPLE, audio recordings have to be 10% or less than the original recording (it is currently 29 seconds and needs to be 23.2 seconds or less)

• I will upload a new sample in a few minutes. Statυs (talk) 23:04, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

•  Done Statυs (talk) 23:18, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

Live performances

• No issues

Fiat commercial

• No issues

Credits and personnel

• No issues

Charts

• No issues

References

• Reference 1 → "MTV News" should not be italicized and also needs to be wiki-linked
• Reference 5 → "Rap-Up" should not be wiki-linked

•  Done Statυs (talk) 23:04, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues that you believe do not concern the good article criteria. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 22:54, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

All issues have been addressed, so I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 23:22, 26 June 2012 (UTC)