Talk:Until the Whole World Hears (song)

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June 16, 2012Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 18:09, 16 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

You are at the top of the list once again, my friend. Statυs (talk) 18:09, 16 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Lead / Infobox
  • I'm not seeing a source for Christian rock as the genre of the song.
  • An arena rock song with a crunchy guitar lick accompanied by blasting guitar chords and the throaty growl of Mark Hall's vocals, the song lyrically revolves around speaking the truth into a culture that doesn't want to hear it --> Should be split into two different sentences. The first in which, needs to be rewritten. I'm not too sure "throaty growl of Mark Hall's vocals" is proper to say. Edit: reading along, I see specific person said that. Quotation marks are needed and it will be fine.
  • "Until the Whole World Hears" received positive reception from critics and has been used as both an opening and closing song in concert. --> Two completely different ideas. Specify as music critics and maybe say what they said about the song? And then have how it was used as the opening and closing song during their concert; which one?
  • No need to say they also performed the song at the event.
  • It peaked atop the Billboard Hot Christian Songs, Hot Christian AC and Christian AC Monitored charts, at number four on the Billboard Christian CHR chart, at number ten on the Billboard Christian Digital Songs chart and at number twenty-three on the Billboard Heatseekers Songs chart. --> It peaked atop the Billboard Hot Christian Songs, Hot Christian AC and Christian AC Monitored charts. It also peaked at number four on the Billboard Christian CHR chart, number ten on the Billboard Christian Digital Songs chart and number twenty-three on the Billboard Heatseekers Songs chart.
  • Can a bigger version of the cover be uploaded? The default size of the single template is about 220px, and the image is only 170. 300px would be a good size, as that is what is most commonly used; to cover all grounds.
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  • No need to state when it was released here. This should probably be mentioned in the lead.
  • Advanced is used a bit too often. I'm not really sure what other word you could use though. "The following week it reached a new position of...", maybe?
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Some composition info is inaccurate

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The song is in C♯ major (or perhaps B♭ minor), not D major. The vocal range is also much too high. Tempo is too fast — Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.40.1.86 (talk) 21:57, 12 August 2017 (UTC)Reply