Talk:Unusual You/GA1

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Reviewer: Blackjacks101 (talk) 23:58, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

Hey I will be reviewing this article soon =). Nice to see another Britney getting worked on!--Blackjacks101 (talk) 23:58, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

Great Job with the links, just one problem. Your first reference is to prove the release of the song in Australia and New Zealand but all I see is it proving the release in New Zealand. Is there something I'm missing? If I'm not you will have to find a reliable source saying it was released in Australia. More will be coming, though don't expect many errors though! =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:20, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

Lol just a few little things

• The song was written by Christian Karlsson, Henrik Jonback, Pontus Winnberg and Kasia Livingston, and produced by Bloodshy & Avant for Spears' sixth studio album, Circus (2008). – that is confusing....Christian Karlsson and Pontus Winnberg are part of Bloodshy & Avant but this makes it sound as if they are different and that Christian and Pontus didn’t produce the track, people may not be able to make that connection

• "Unusual You" was written by Christian Karlsson and Pontus Winnberg from Bloodshy & Avant, as well as Kasia Livingston and Henrik Jonback, while being produced by Bloodshy & Avant. -This is kind of being picky but I find saying Bloodshy & Avant twice is kind of repetative why don't you state them last and then say "while being produced by the latter."

 Done --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 02:14, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

Reverted. You can't put Bloodshy & Avant last, they're the main writers of the song. Xwomanizerx (talk) 11:28, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

That wasn't my edit. I only said "while being produced by the former two." --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 12:51, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

• The song was recorded by Spears at Conway Studios in Los Angeles, California, and was later mixed by Anders Hvenare and Bloodshy and Avant at Robotberget in Stockholm, Sweden. – you say that Anders Hvenare mixed the track as well, would that not make him a producer of the song?

 Done --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 02:14, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

Reverted. No, he isn't. He's just the mixer. Xwomanizerx (talk) 11:28, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

Overall pretty easy to review! But, you may find people that will send this to AfD since though it was released as a single it didn't chart where it was released, and where is charted on the Pop 100 isn't that notable. Then it also was never performed and never received a music video. Could it not be easily be put in the single section of Circus and still give all the neccessary information? I hope you understand my Point of View, I don't want to sound like I'm doubting your work, I just want you to be aware that the single isn't that notable and could very likely be sent to AfD.--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:37, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

This is a keep per WP:GNG. If it was for me though, this would be deleted in a second. Xwomanizerx (talk) 11:28, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

Note: I see that another editor that didn't nominate the article has stepped in without asking for permission. I will answer the concerns myself. Xwomanizerx (talk) 11:28, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

We need permission to contribute to getting articles to GA status? --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:06, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

KK, now I understand, just though mixing was part of the producer's job that's all =D, how about my first comment about the reference?--Blackjacks101 (talk) 13:15, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

I added a reference for the Australian release. Xwomanizerx (talk) 10:52, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

K...I'm passing =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 14:55, 2 February 2011 (UTC)