Talk:Uwe Holmer/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: HistoryTheorist (talk · contribs) 03:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 03:56, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

Hi, i'll review this as part of WP:GARC. Will start shortly. 750h+ 03:56, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

Thanks! I am a bit busy too, so don't rush, but don't forget to review! I would really appreciate some honest feedback on the early life section, but sources were hard to come by and I don't have enough money or German skills to buy his autobiography. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 05:18, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

prose

lead

• Holmer was the head of Bibelschule Falkenberg from 1967 to 1983 and the head of Hoffnungstaler remove the second "the head of"

early life

• After he graduated secondary school ==> "After graduating secondary school"

ministry

• Because the subject is German, this should be written in British English. Therefore, Holmer criticized the GDR, opposing forced collectivization ==> "Holmer criticised the GDR, opposing forced collectivisation"

later life and death

• Nothing wrong here.

sources and images

• Nothing wrong with images or sources. I’m happy with the early life sources, but if you plan to take this to FA you’re probably going to need that autobiography. Happy to pass once the above concerns are addressed, @HistoryTheorist:. 750h+ 07:19, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

  @750h+ have addressed all concerns, feel free to pass. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 00:11, 27 September 2024 (UTC)

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