Talk:Vicky Kaushal/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Ssven2 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 04:52, 7 March 2019 (UTC)Reply


I will review this article, thank you.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 04:52, 7 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

Comments
  • "Aspiring to a career in films" — Can be rephrased as "Aspiring to take up a career in film".
  • "His father was keen on his son having a stable career" — As an engineer or any other position in the film industry.
Most likely as an engineer, but the source doesn't explicitly mention it. I therefore wrote that he "thus pursued an engineering degree" later in the sentence. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Does any source mention Laal Pencil's genre?
Nope, couldn't find any mention of it. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Perhaps a wikilink to "stammering" in case readers don't quite get the meaning at first.
Ssven2, thanks for the comments. :) Krimuk2.0 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2019 (UTC)Reply
Sources
  • Wikilink the publishers/newspapers/websites for ref nos 1 to 7.
  • NDTV, Rediff.com, Box Office India, Film Companion, RajeevMasand.com shouldn't be in italics.
  • Wikilink the publishers/newspapers/websites for ref nos 10, 11 and 12.
  • Wikilink NDTV and The Hindu in ref nos 15 and 16 respectively.
  • Wikilink Variety in ref no 20.
  • Remove the wikilink for ref no 24 (Firspost) coz there are other Firstpost references before it.
  • Wikilink Business Standard, India Today, Bollywood Hungama, Mid Day
  • Remove the wikilink for ref no 30 (NDTV) coz there are other NDTV references before it.
  • Remove the wikilink for ref no 38 (Filmfare) coz there are other Filmfare references before it.

That's about it from me. Resolve the remaining comments and the article is passed.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 07:26, 7 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

Ssven2, all done. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 07:35, 7 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:  
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
    Pass or Fail:  

Thank you for addressing my comments, Krimuk2.0. Congratulations, the article has passed.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 08:01, 7 April 2019 (UTC)Reply