Talk:Victoria Skating Rink/GA1

GA Review

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• Comment. The format for dates needs much attention. Grsz^talk 23:55, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

I have updated the dates, and touched up some cites. Alaney2k (talk) 23:55, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Here's some more for you:

• "rich, English, industrialists" - excessive commas.

• Link Windsor Hotel.

• Some "is"'s need changed to "was"'s in the Building section.

• "An quote" → "A quote"

• Some wikilinks missing, like Montreal Hockey Club, Nova Scotia.

• When explaining the nine man limit, the fact that there were no substitutions could probably be added into the sentence rather than in parenthesis.

• I understand the "slapshot north" reference in Location Today, but casual reader may not.

• Section headers don't have two capitals per WP:MOS - Current Events and Location Today.

• ISBN for other books?

Hope that helps. Grsz^talk 19:58, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

Several of the books predate the ISBN system. I have put the ones in that do have them. Alaney2k (talk) 21:55, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

I think I have most of these things covered. I am going to check out a few books on Montreal history. Alaney2k (talk) 23:35, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

I guess that's true, I wasn't sure. Grsz^X 16:22, 2 October 2008 (UTC)

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