Talk:Villahermosa

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Idubs1234567890 in topic Removing puffery

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Can someone check out this article? I'm not sure about grammar and style. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Roberto.arias~enwiki (talkcontribs) 00:00, 30 July 2004 (UTC)Reply

Removing puffery

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I'm deleting the following from the first paragraph, in regard to the city's location:

...and 998 kilometers from Cancún, making it the virtual equidistant stopover point between these two world-renowned centers of tourism.

First of all, a difference of 150 kilometers in distance hardly makes the two locations "virtually equidistant," and it sounds like the whole sentence was simply written to persuade tourists to stop over in Villahermosa. The distance to Mexico City is relevant, perhaps, given that it's the capital. 850 C (talk) 18:27, 3 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

But villermosa is a beautiful town but is that wat the article is about? Idubs1234567890 (talk) 15:39, 25 April 2017 (UTC)Reply