Talk:Vladimir Teplyakov
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GA Review
edit- This review is transcluded from Talk:Vladimir Teplyakov/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Materialscientist (talk) 07:03, 30 July 2010 (UTC)
To start the review
- It is great that you wrote an article on that person, but to become a GA, in my view it needs much more content. Whereas there are no strict guidelines on the length of GA, this is biography and there is lot of pertinent information which could and should be added. (Born .. where? in what kind of family? studied where? what? Then the war .. awarded Order of Glory for what? He got medal for the Capture of Vienna, thus apparently went there? How about personal life, married? children? Still alive? etc, etc)
- Technical details need to be wikilinked and/or briefly explained. "co-author of Linear Accelerators of Ions" - is a journal or book, translated? "Radio frequency quadrupole" is jargon, which is not very clear even to me, and thus needs some explanation. For 99% readers, cavities would associate with teeth, not with resonators.
- "From 1959–1966" is unclear. From 1959 to 1966? or the starting year is uncertain to that wide range?
- "For the rest of his life, Teplyakov continued to work at IHEP" - till the age of 84? Materialscientist (talk) 07:03, 30 July 2010 (UTC)
- I agree with the above, and since there has been no work done in a few weeks, it should be failed at GAN. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 14:36, 21 August 2010 (UTC)
- Well, I hoped to initiate the improvement process. Those comments are not a complete GA review, and thus if the article is renominated, more could be added, but for now, I have to fail this GAN. Sorry. Materialscientist (talk) 00:29, 22 August 2010 (UTC)
Unreferenced portions to work on at the talk page
editTeplyakov received the highest decorations bestowed by the Soviet Union, the Order of Lenin and the Order of the October Revolution.[citation needed] He was one of the first to receive the title "Veteran of Nuclear Industry"[citation needed] and also received the title "Honored Worker of Science and Technology of Russian Federation".[citation needed] V.A. Teplyakov was an Honorary Citizen of Protvino.[citation needed]
The URAL-30 proton linac was commissioned in 1977. It applies a through front-to-end RFQ-focusing up to the top energy of 30 MeV.[citation needed] Since 1985 URAL-30 routinely operates as an injector to booster proton synchrotron of IHEP.[citation needed]
Moved material here that did not have sources.
The people can see it here and work on it to add sources if want to add it back to article. Sagecandor (talk) 01:06, 27 November 2016 (UTC)