Talk:Vought XSO2U

Latest comment: 13 years ago by AirplanePro in topic GA Review
Good articleVought XSO2U has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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January 15, 2011Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 22, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that although the Vought XSO2U (pictured) was judged superior to the Curtiss XSO3C by the U.S. Navy in a competition for a new scout aircraft for operation from cruisers, the Curtiss aircraft won the contract?

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Reviewer: WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 00:12, 15 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

I will review this over the weekend:

The first thing I noticed was that the article seems a little on the small side. Can you reticify that? That won't stop it from passing GAN, but you might have problems higher up, like at FAC. WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 00:12, 15 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

You are writing this in British English, right? Some of the words I come across are spelled ... *aha!* interestingly. WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 21:59, 15 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Heavy reliance on Adcock, something that will haunt you in FAC and ACR if you don't fix it now (maybe even a GAR). WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 22:08, 15 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
Beyond that, I think this article can pass. Good work. WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 22:10, 15 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
Yup, I use a 'British-ish English' primarily; I'll see if I can find any additional sources, but as a "failed project" there's not much out there on the SO2U. So, it passed? Awesome. Much thanks! - The Bushranger One ping only 23:11, 15 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
Yes it does. Good job. WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 23:14, 15 January 2011 (UTC)Reply