Talk:W.I.T.C.H./Archive 1

Archive 1

Assessment

This is a good start, but it's all listified, and written from an in-universe perspective. There's also not enough detail on any aspects of the publication and creation. The creative and translating roles need to be expanded and examined to get it up to a b-class. Rated it as low importance, but if it is as popular as is suggested, I can see movement to mid. Hiding Talk 14:29, 7 February 2007 (UTC)

Edits

Okey, so I first saw some weird things on Cornelia Hale's page though I think they have been edited now. Quoting from this article:

Scoundrel Phobos - Sly, arrogant and ruthless....

So, why has someone changed this from Prince Phobos to Scoundrel Phobos? Unless a reason is given, I'll change it back to Prince. --Hackeru 21:24, 22 June 2007 (UTC)

Story Arc alignment in graphic novels/chapter books

Could someone make a page showing just how the different story arcs align with the issues/volumes of the different mediums? The article already shows which issues of the comic correspond to the different arcs (e.g. 1-12 = fight for meridian), but which chapter books cover each of the arcs, and what do the new graphic novels cover? I read the first chapter book, then stopped for over a year, and picked up with the cartoon. Now that I'm through season 2 with no guarantee of a season 3, I want to pick up the books again. But if I choose the graphic novels or the chapter books, I don't know where to start...which is why I think this article would be helpful. I can't do it myself because I don't know! Thanks... Godheval 15:21, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

It depends on what arc you will pick up reading the books. If it's for the third arc, you should begin with book 25. The 26th book is published already, which is also the censored one. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Irmalover (talk • contribs) 00:15, 25 April 2008 (UTC)

Article too long

Can I suggest that this article be broken up into several articles, as it's getting quite long? There are already articles on the main characters, and I have been working on adding others (Elyon, Phobos). —Preceding unsigned comment added by Xtremesage (talk • contribs) 06:32, 28 August 2006 (UTC)

I've added it to Wikipedia:WikiProject Comics's task list under Condense. Hopefully that should help. Øřêōş 01:19, 14 January 2007 (UTC)

It would be a good idea to split the parts up and place them in separate pages.

--Irmalover 03:54, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

I think that if you split the article up, you'll end up with a bunch of stub pages that no onewill ever finish... it's not a smart idea. yours truly; --71.34.29.90 22:27, 6 July 2007 (UTC)Pine Marten

That makes sense. Then we have to leave out some information which is not too important to know. I suggest to remove the titles of the issues, and leave a summary of each saga.

-- Irmalover (talk) 11:19, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

Poor wording

From the article:

Japan decided to break this mold and create an authentic manga based on the comic, which was canceled after only two volumes.

A country decided it? It should be something like: "Japanese publisher [name here] decided...", or "Japanese manga artist [name here] decided..." Stormwatch 02:41, 30 November 2005 (UTC)

Since no information on the publisher or author are given, I decided to simply point out that the comic wasn't published in Japan and that a manga was created. I also removed the original speculation for why it was cancelled as it was purely POV.--Tenka Muteki 04:36, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

The Japanese paperback issues clearly state that they are published by Kadokawa Shoten, made by Iida Haruko, covers by Daisuke Ehara and originally published in Gekkan Asuka from the same publisher. (218.228.195.44 06:24, 30 September 2006 (UTC))

to Stormwatch, what you said about A country decided really isn't a big deal. You're just being a perfectionist, and nothing is perfect. Sorry if I'm being rude, but you just need a vacation.

--71.34.29.90 22:32, 6 July 2007 (UTC)Pine Marten

Uncertain

The article portrays Luba as a male (because it says "he"). But isn't she a female? --Mithcoriel 12:20, 11 December 2005 (UTC)

Well, actually....you're right. Luba is a female. --Oreos 10:06, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

As a matter of fact, Mithcoriel, I'll fix that right now.

--71.34.29.90 22:34, 6 July 2007 (UTC)Pine Marten

I want to add these pictures into main article

• Will as on comic
• Cornelia as on comic
• Taranee as on comic
• Irma and Hay Lin as on comic

(From http://ppgcom.gooside.com/diary/diary0409.html (Find 2004年9月21日 (火) ) )

• Simillarity in both Manga 1 2 3 and Comic 1 2 3.

(From http://ppgcom.gooside.com/diary/diary0501.html#050128 )

• W.I.T.C.H. together (as on comic)
• Irma, Taranee, Hay Lin

(From http://ppgcom.gooside.com/diary/diary0501.html#050110 )

--성혀니 10:59, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

Sŏnghyŏni: Where would they fit? Do you mean as a comparison between Iida's and Gnone's versions of the comic? (Stefan2 06:39, 5 October 2006 (UTC))

The big picture on the Witch comic page doesn't belong there. Its place is on the TV show page. The best picture is a cover of one of the comics. And by the way, there are better pictures than the proposed ones.

--Irmalover 10:52, 9 May 2007 (UTC)

Most Popular?

Does anyone have a link to verify this article's claim that this comic is "the most purchased in the world"? It mentions Brand Republic, but gives no link to the page backing up this claim. Until than, I've removed the reference, along with unneeded advertising.--Tenka Muteki 04:33, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

That claim was restored, with a footnote [6] that leads only to some technical argument about how to make comparisons...I am removing it again. -Bustter 19:44, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

It is the most bought comic in the world, though. According to the publisher: http://www.summitmedia.com.ph/magazines/witch.php it states it's the fourth best selling magazine. And magazines sell millions more copies than comic books per issue, especially the top magazines which can sell over 30 million issues per month, or so. Amibite 9/24/06

Brendan Schulze?

Um, where/when does Brendan appear? Is there any info on him on the internet? Thanks. Mayukhers112 17:51, 26 February 2006 (UTC)

I don't think he appears/exists anywhere. I looked W.I.T.C.H. up on the I.N.D.U.C.K.S. database, and Brendan doesn't appear in the list of characters. That's why I removed him from the list; correct me if he does. Oreos 16:21, 15 March 2006 (UTC)

Anime style?

The Animated Series page says the comic is anime-influenced, but this page says the animated series is anime-style, I personally think that the animated series is more in Western style, except for the transformation scenes, but I'd rather have an expert who knows exactly what defines anime and western style drawing. Also I've never read the comics so I don't know if the animated series is more anime-influenced or less. So could someone clear up that point? Jztinfinity 17:19, 9 April 2006 (UTC)

--- The comic is done in traditional Disney style (which anime was influenced by, such as the famous Osamu Tezuka who is hailed as the Grandfather of manga) so that may be why people mistake the comic for it. The animated series, though, is animated in France and has a slight manga-ish look to it, although it's not too noticable. So in this case this page would be correct. Amibite 1:38 9 April]]

Correction: Tezuka was influenced by the style of Disney's original shorts and early films. "Traditional Disney style" pretty much changed each decade, to the point where none of their 1990's or 2000 films look each use drastically different styles. If anything, the W.I.T.C.H. comic looks closer to a Western take on Japanese style, in the way that The Big O looks like a "Japanese take on Western style". The animated series does look a little closer, however.--Tenka Muteki 05:06, 12 May 2006 (UTC)

To clarify. Everythign has gone round in a circle. The modern style of Anime (big heads and doe eyes and super deformed chibis) is largely due to the influence of early Disney (etc) cartoons that came into Japan after WWII. This then developed into the more distinctive form that everybody thinks of as Anime and Manga style today which, in turn, has recently been imported back into the US and modified slightly again.

As for "Anime style" whatever you want to call it, this franchise is very heavily influenced by Anime/Manga. It's not just the transformation sequences. The use of long panning shots, the fighting style of the characters (especially elemental mysticism behind their powers), and the heavy emphasis on the interpersonal relations between the characters and their existence outside of WITCH is all extremely Asian.

perfectblue 11:46, 2 January 2007 (UTC)

*sigh*

Okay. First of all, 'part 1 issues', 'part 2 issues', and 'part 3 issues' goes for the ORIGINAL issues, like the ones from Singapore, the Philippines, Italy, etc. and NOT the US. We have the 'US Book Titles' section for that. Whoever keeps reverting the edits to book titles, and not mag titles, really should stop. Thanks. --Oreos^TalkContribs 14:47, 30 April 2006 (UTC)

Characters and Iusses

Please do not move the Guardian biographies onto this page, as well as the special issue summaries. It is getting too cluttered and we have to start cleaning it up and make new articles.

New: The Elyon special is added! Please don't remove!

A few days ago I added the summary of the Elyon special. This evening I discovered someone has deleted it. Please don't let it happen again. Soon I will add another summary, the special "Boy's Planet".

Approval for addition of 'Italian comics' category

If I'm not mistaken, the W.I.T.C.H. comic book has been created in Italy. Am I right?

If so, please confirm to this message so to approve the inclusion of the Italian comics category into the W.I.T.C.H. category listing at the bottom of the page.

If the ctegory doesn't exists, may I be able to create it? Thanks in advance.

--Cristóbal 03:08, 6 August 2006 (UTC)

The category exists now, so I've added the comic to it. 79.2.243.161 09:49, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

It's correct. W.I.T.C.H. is created in the Disney Studios in Milan, Italy.

Irmalover (talk) 03:20, 9 March 2008 (UTC)

Endarno's identity

"When Endarno assumes the position as Oracle in the fourth arc, the imprisoned Cedric believes he has met a kindred spirit, since the new Oracle displays manners similar to those of Phobos."

The summary of Cedric's history stretches until after this, so I don't think there's a reason (i.e. spoiler-related reason) for not writing the whole story here: that Endarno *is* Phobos - or rather, that Phobos has taken over Endarno's body. As far as I can tell, Cedric was aware of this the entire time. I'm new to Wikipedia, so I hope someone else can edit this. :) 84.49.105.254 19:26, 10 September 2006 (UTC)

Note 6

"Note 6: On the W.I.T.C.H. TV series, Anna is Irma's birth mother, not her stepmother, as she remembers when Irma was a baby."

Does this also mean that her surname in the TV series isn't Bannister, but Lair? In the comic story "L'isola dei ricordi" (part 57), there are several illusions, one of them resembling Irma's mother (according to Irma herself). And this illusion looks just like Anna Bannister. This might need to be mentioned. (Stefan2 10:40, 5 October 2006 (UTC))

The woman in issue 57 is the illusive projection of Irma's birth mother, who Irma only knew in the first years of her life. The fact that Irma's birth mother and Anna Bannister look like each other is pure coincidence.

--Irmalover 03:17, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

Information box

In the information box in the upper-right corner, there's a picture of an English-language issue, but the text associated with that image talks about the Italian W.i.t.c.h. magazine. If there's text about an Italian publication, it looks strange to have a scan of a non-Italian issue. (Stefan2 13:50, 6 October 2006 (UTC))

WE

i will make an article for WELCOME.but for now, do you like the edits i made to the welcome section?Sir aaron sama girl 19:19, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

I have reverted your changes to one of my edits. Without references and citations, your edits constituted biased POV almost to the point of vandalism. If you believe your edits to be correct, please provide reliable sources.--Kenn Caesius 19:28, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

WElcome still exists as an insert in the Italian Witch issues.--Irmalover (talk) 08:40, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

Move to W.I.T.C.H.

I propose that this article is moved to W.I.T.C.H.. Same name but all in upper case. Any objections? --Apoc2400 14:14, 25 November 2006 (UTC)

Actually, it seems like W.i.t.c.h. is the correct name. So why is W.I.T.C.H. (in all upper case) written all over the article? --Apoc2400 14:16, 25 November 2006 (UTC)

It's written as both. The logo only capitalizes the W, but whenever Disney Italy/America mentions it in text, it's all capitals. --Amibite 17:48, 25 November 2006 (UTC)

I'm doing some cleanup today

I will do some cleanup of the articles related to W.i.t.c.h. today. I will start by collecting them all in a new Category:W.I.T.C.H.. I'm sorry for any temporary mess that will occur. Feel free to revert if I screw up. I have never read the series or seen the TV version, so my contribution will be more in the field of organization and Wikipedia style. --Apoc2400 02:22, 26 November 2006 (UTC)

Spelling of Kandracar?

there seam to be several differing spelling of Kandracar. should we use Kandracar spelt with a 'K' or Candracar spelt with a 'C'? depends on which region your in i suppose. Is there a standard? In any event i think it would be a good idea to at least mention the difference in spelling. Think outside the box 10:53, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

I think that the C spelling only applies to the US. Since this is a European comic/series and the number of countire that use K outnumbers the number of countries that use C, I advice that we stick with the K spelling. perfectblue 11:37, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

yes, i looked into and i think your right. thanks! Think outside the box 09:54, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

i know this isn't really the place to ask but are you a witch fan aswel? Think outside the box 11:01, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

I'm a fan children's entertainment that steps away from the sanitized, dumbed down, non continuous down, "Dexters Lab" format promoted by the networks, which I blame for making our kids dumb couch potatoes with no attention span, and parents freaky about "Sex and violence" on children's TV.

perfectblue 12:59, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

I do agree that we should use the K spelling. As for the difference, there is a note in the notes sec. that mentions the spelling differences. Øřêōş 20:52, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

Because I'm in the posession of some Italian issues and two specials I can tell the original name is Kandrakar.

Irmalover 02:53, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

In my comics it reads Kandrakar too.

Harry Diserens 15:35, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

Will Vandom

I'd heard that Will has a step sister in the comics who doesn't appear in the animation. Does anybody remember her name?

perfectblue 11:35, 2 January 2007 (UTC)

No, it's the other way around. Apparently she has a stepsister in the animation. She doesn't have one in the comics. I believe it was Kyla. Øřêōş 18:18, 2 January 2007 (UTC)

Are you absolutely certain? Will's father didn't remarry in the Cartoon. He was planning on marry a woman named Sarina Sanchez late in season 2, but I don't recall her having any children, and if they ever actually married it wasn't mentioned prior to season 2 finishing.

perfectblue 20:11, 2 January 2007 (UTC)

I don't watch the show, so I don't know. However, a Will-related article said she had a stepmother and a stepsister. I'll go ask some friends who watch the show and see if they can comfirm it. Øřêōş 01:13, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

I read and watch and theres no stepsister in either. Harry Diserens 14:30, 24 July 2007 (UTC)

Veil

When was the veil raised in the comic?

In the animation it was raised within human memory, but I've heard that it was raised much earlier in the comic.

perfectblue 11:36, 2 January 2007 (UTC)

It was raised at the dawn of time

Harry Diserens 19:48, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

In the first comic book (Haloween) the veil is known as the stitching. While in later comics it is known as the wall.

Harry Diserens 19:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

In Italy it is named "muraglia", which means "wall". As an answer to your question: the wall is raised tens of thousands years ago, at least. So it has to exist before Phobos took control.

Irmalover 03:37, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

In Sweden its called "muren" which means "wall"

Harry Diserens 16:24 23 July 2007

It's named the veil from issue 12 onwards.

W.I.T.C.H. category

Please stop removing the Category:W.I.T.C.H. link from the article. Øřêōş 18:19, 2 January 2007 (UTC)

Guardians of the Veil vs. Guardians of Candracar

Which one is right? -User:Aidoflight 18:59, 2 January 2007

I believe it changes from Guardians of the Veil to Guardians of Kandrakar after the first saga. Øřêōş 01:12, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

In the animation, they are the Guardians of the veil for the first season, but after that they are usually just referred to as being the Guardians. It might not be strictly correct, but I think that Guardians of the Veil is the best known.

perfectblue 08:31, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

In the first Saga (and season) the Guardians were both the Guardians of Kandrakar and the wall. After the Oracle removed the wall the Guardians became just the Guardians of Kandrakar.

--Irmalover 11:11, 9 May 2007 (UTC)

Hay Lin Page

Does anyone know if we should include it or not? It's one of the most known W.I.T.C.H. fansites, and usually a few fansites are included in pages (see The Sims 2- Mod the Sims 2 and the Sims Resource are included, and they're fansites). Any ideas? Øřêōş 20:28, 11 January 2007 (UTC)

Star of Threbe

I need to add more information concerning this particular artifact to certain articles. Please give me as much information as you can to help both me and Wikipedia. Thanks very much!!! Aidoflight 00:16, 21 January 2007 (UTC)

I haven't heard about it so far, but you could try checking Hay Lin's Page. Øřêōş 01:44, 21 January 2007 (UTC)

The Star of Threbe is an artifact from the TV show. The artifacts on Hay Lin's page are from the comics.

--Irmalover 11:03, 9 May 2007 (UTC)

It's definitly only in the TV show, not in the comic

Harry Diserens 14:22, 24 July 2007 (UTC)

Phobos and Elyon

I have a few questions regarding these two characters. First of all, did Phobos actually murder his parents to gain the title as ruler of Meridian? I have tried to gather as much info about this as I can, but the comic books only say that his parents disappeared under mysterious circumstances, and after Phobos ursurped the throne, it is shown that his mother, at least, is dead as she is shown in spirit form when she converses with Elyon. Also, I believe Elyon was involved in the Season 4 saga of the comic book, when Endarno became the new Oracle. The info I have about this is that Endarno demanded that Elyon hand over the Crown of Light and give up her title as Queen of meridian, but I would like to have some more info. Thanks! Aidoflight 23:40, 26 January 2007 (UTC)

During his imprisonement in the Tower of Mists Phobos managed to grow his last remaining bit of power by hatred. After that he used the power to seize the body of Endarno, the guard of the Tower, while Endarno's spirit moved into Phobos' body. No one noticed the change. Phobos only shared this knowledge with Cedric, who got the task to get the Heart of Kandrakar from Will. When Elyon finally complied to appear before him in Kandrakar she recognized him as her brother. Because she refused to obey his demands she got imprisoned. By that time Yan Lin had recognized him too as the former tyrant of Meridian. Irmalover 06:54, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

Criticism

Why is there no criticism section? Surely, in the USA, some fundamentalist Christian organisation has to have claimed this comic book promotes Satanism. JIP | Talk 07:15, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

'Some fundamentalist Christian organization' isn't notable.75.65.91.142 02:44, 16 May 2007 (UTC)

Hmm...well, that is an arguable point, about whether it is 'notable' but I personally never felt the books led anyone into Satanism, no... Celestialwarden11 (talk) 20:58, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

May 2007 Discussion regarding article length

At 56Kb, this article is almost twice over the limit of the 32Kb recommended by wikipedia, but perhaps relevent to the editors of this article that I believe that article has become iincreasingly difficult to edit by being bogged down with seemingly cramped walls of text. With this is in mind, I would like to start a discussion to best deal with this problem.

Off the top of my head, I will suggest the following and request feedback from editors that would like to help.

• The descriptions of the W.I.T.C.H. protagonist should be edited, condensed and perhaps merged with respective biographical articles from the respective articles from the W.I.T.C.H. (TV series)

• The "parts" section describing the numerous storylines should have their own articles

• The "villains" sections should be merged with the respective storyline article, unless they have made numerous appearances through out storylines.

These three are the most pressing at the moment, and I am sure that there are still smaller details that will be dealt with eventually. Suggestions, comments? I would like to have them on this talkpage.--Kevin586 04:56, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

I would think that if you did all three of those, it would cut down on alot of the space on here.Wild ste 21:00, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

Joel

I'm just unsure when does joel come in the picture? 3 season books? -irmagirl

Agent Joel comes in in issue 10, 1st season.

Joel Wright is already present in issue 6, but not known by name yet. His name is revealed in issue 37. Irmalover 20:00, 14 August 2007 (UTC)Irmalover

irmas powers

in irma article it says 'She can Freeze water or evaporate water as please', is this true in the comic books? if so it should say so in the article, because in the animated series she always need to use hay lin to freeze the water for her —Preceding unsigned comment added by Joseph mitchell9 (talk • contribs) 16:54, 5 December 2007 (UTC)

Yes, she can. She even controls any liquid matter different than water. She is also capable to create giant air bubbles capable to host people. Irmalover (talk) 11:19, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

nudity?

The first lines says something about nudity, but the rest of the article says nothing. Anyone knows which issues has nudity? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.230.63.67 (talk) 21:15, 9 December 2007 (UTC)

I just got really pissed about the fact that the issues only contained sailormoon like nudity, no nipples, no nothing, just smooth skin. Wasted my time on this... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.230.63.2 (talk) 19:09, 27 December 2007 (UTC)

The most nudity is found on the walls of Kandrakar. Irmalover (talk) 21:30, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

New Power

In New Power it is mentioned that their appearance changes. Can we get an image to conform this? I think it would improve the article. --MahaPanta (talk) 08:24, 7 April 2008 (UTC)

To me that's quite early. The Ragorlang saga hasn't got a short description and the complete information about the New Power saga is still unclear, because the latest editions are only in Italian yet. Irmalover (talk) 10:47, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

The girls look more mature and their powers have reached perfection. The suits have changed and all but Taranee's suit are controllable like those of Spawn (comics) and Angela (comics). —Preceding unsigned comment added by Irmalover (talk • contribs) 08:20, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

Guardians paragraph

The first paragraph is entirely based on the tv series while this is the comic page. In the comics it wasn't Yan Lin who stated the Guardians could teletransport. At first she's dead, at second she never teletransported by herself. Will learned it from Caleb, later the rest of the girls learned it from Will. There's also a limit to immortality. The Guardians do die in their human form. They can stay in Kandrakar forever, but they have the choice to end up into oblivion. Irmalover (talk) 11:03, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

End of the Philippines run

I checked the trivia section, and WHERE is this exactly confirmed? Sources please! 210.4.105.83 (talk) 10:51, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

The publisher Summit Media in the Philippines don't have W.i.t.c.h. in their magazine list anymore. That should be the most trustable source. Irmalover (talk) 02:35, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Comic/Cartoon mixup

It sometimes happens that cartoon elements are being put in the comic page of W.I.T.C.H., which can't be allowed. The most recent case was the description of Nerissa, in "which Quintessence" was mentioned. This belongs to the cartoon page. Therefore I had to delete an entire paragraph. Irmalover (talk) 23:00, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

I ask myself why there are cartoon elements and characters in the template section of this comic page. In my opinion they don't belong here. Irmalover (talk) 11:13, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

W.I.T.C.H. Second Video Game?

How come the second video game announced at this article? Is it still for Game Boy Advanced? I had to delete that sentence for not to be confused. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Chame45 (talk • contribs) 22:26, 31 May 2008 (UTC)

WITCHcast Podcast

Why exactly can't i add this

W.I.T.C.H.cast Podcast 

W.I.T.C.H.cast Podcast is an unofficial W.I.T.C.H. internet show that has been collecting prestige in W.I.T.C.H. fan space, it is made by two w.i.t.c.h. fans, it's completely free, it's homepage is http://witchcast.podomatic.com/

It's something new, somethign that havent been come up with, it's active, there's no way it makes any money by being here and it basically helps to keep w.i.t.c.h. alive in other forms than the comic, cause the tv w.i.t.c.h. is cancelled —Preceding unsigned comment added by Dragonguy93 (talk • contribs) 18:52, 21 June 2008 (UTC)

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Split most characters into a list of characters?

The page is, honestly, huge and takes forever to read or scroll through. Should the villains and some of the other characters and locations be moved to a list with more information and locations, instead of taking up space on the main article? As in, leaving the headings and replacing the content with Main Article: (main article), and moving the content to the new article. Cailunet^rawr 05:04, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

I propose splitting the list of characters into another page. Cailunet^rawr 01:45, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

Plot holes?

Is there really a need for a section on plot holes in the series? Lord Seth (talk) 08:06, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

It's better to place that on more specialized websites. The Wikipedia pages would become too large.Irmalover (talk) 02:40, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

iya

OMG i love W.I.T.C.H ihave watch every single program and i have 1 Q y does celb dumped cornilla 2 get back 2gether wif her —Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.41.57.233 (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

You seem to talk about both the comics and the television series. Caleb and Cornelia will never have romantic relationship again. Now there's romance between Caleb and Elyon. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Irmalover (talk • contribs) 08:25, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

Clean up issues

Need your help to improve and reorganise W.I.T.C.H. and its related articles, as well as their structures. Discuss more at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Disney#W.I.T.C.H.. -- JSH-alive ^{talk • cont • mail} 11:20, 4 January 2010 (UTC)

Peer review

W.I.T.C.H.

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review to find out what portion is needed to improve it. Over the years, the article got unprofessional, fancruft look. I can't do the task that you suggested by myself alone. So I need someone's help.

Thanks, JSH-alive ^{talk • cont • mail} 07:20, 2 January 2010 (UTC) (Edited 01:45, 10 January 2010 (UTC) )

MCorazao comments:

• My first recommendation would be to look at an article like Superman or Batman and use it as a model. Try to build your article in a similar fashion.
• Most of the article is lists of comic issues and books. But the article is not fundamentally a list article. I would say that, if the lists are considered notable for some reason, they should be moved to their own articles and removed from this one. It would be better for the article to discuss the series as a whole. To the extent that individual issues or books are mentioned, in general they should either be discussed (i.e. say something about the issue), or else not mentioned.
• Aside from the lists of issues and books, the article largely focuses on the storylines. There is some discussion of how the series was created and such but ideally there should be more discussion about this, the popularity of the series, reception from critics if applicable, etc. Look at the Superman article as an example.
• There are almost no citations/references. Each paragraph or item should have at least one inline citation (<ref>).
• The one reference that is provided (http://www.kaaberboel.dk/uk-the-witch-series.htm) is a dead link. Even at that the site itself looks like a self-published site. Ideally the article should use authoritative sources like books, newspapers or news sites, etc. (and preferably secondary sources).
  • Also, when referencing foreign-language sites it is often a good idea to insert a quote from the site translated into English. That makes gives reviewers that don't speak the language a little more confidence that your references are legit.
• Book names should be in italics.
• <ref> tags should generally go at the end of sentences.
• Avoid abbreviating things; make statements plain. For example, "Lene Kaaberbøl has written nine books taking place in the W.I.T.C.H. universe, published 2002-2003" should be "Lene Kaaberbøl has written nine books taking place in the W.I.T.C.H. universe, which were published in 2002 and 2003" (or something similar).
• The Manga and Welcome sections are extremely short. Sections like this should either be expanded or merged into other sections.

Hope that helps.

--Mcorazao (talk) 04:47, 7 January 2010 (UTC)

P.S. A comment on the "plot holes" question: The first question, of course, is what is the basis for calling these "plot holes". If the basis for calling these plot holes is that some editor noticed an inconsistency then that is original research (i.e. it doesn't matter if these really are plot holes; the labeling of them as such must be based on the observations of an authoritative source). In general I would tend to argue that such a section is inappropriate anyway. If some recognized critics have argued that there are plot holes it is probably best to simply include these criticisms as part of a section discussing critical reception. --Mcorazao (talk) 20:06, 8 January 2010 (UTC)

Seems like trivial plot holes. Anyway, I removed it.

Reformatting

this article needs a lot of reformatting. for the chapters try to do it in this format

No.	Title	Release date	ISBN
	—	—

for the episodes, is this one.

#	Title	Original air date	Production code
1	"Witch"	dec 2	12
[insert]

episode list need prod codes and chapter list needs ISBN number, which is found on the back cover or inside the book.Bread Ninja (talk) 17:29, 12 January 2010 (UTC)

All right, but, because W.I.T.C.H. is from Disney comics Italy, you must include Italian language titles, release date and ISBN. If the "episode" that you are referring to is from TV series, don't worry, they are on List of W.I.T.C.H. episodes. -- JSH-alive ^{talk • cont • mail} 09:47, 17 January 2010 (UTC)

Sorry i haven't responded in a while, but now I'm here and added this to my watchlist. anyways, i already added the chapter template and i added second column so it wouldn't look so long. i suggest we merge the chapter list together and add the plot in the summary, also add a plot section to get the general idea.Bread Ninja (talk) 18:56, 22 April 2010 (UTC)

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