Talk:WCSH/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 05:14, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

I will (ideally) be able to review this within one week. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:14, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Awesome work! Pass. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 17:55, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check

No concerns.

File(s)

No concerns; the files are relevant, of acceptable and have correct copyright licenses which allow for use on Wikipedia.

Prose

• Wikilink Portland.
• Like the other time I suggested it, wikilink the four-year freeze line to somewhere.
• I am confused on the meaning of "activity around this channel would proceed to unblock channel 6 in Portland".
  • Congress Square Hotel's competitors were part of the group that got the channel 8 permit. Their withdrawal left the channel uncontested and led to the permit grant.
• Is it possible to rephrase the opening sentence from the third paragraph to avoid such close repetition of equipment?
  • Reworded.
• "It announced" – how about WCSH here? Otherwise we use it three times in a row.
• Wikilink NBC.
• Curious, what does test pattern mean? Could it perhaps be wikilinked to somewhere?
  • We do! It's at the more European title of Test card.
    • Ahh now I get it!
• "The Rines family, which" – should it not be who? Relatedly:
• The relative clause sentence between the commas (I forgor what it is called) for the aforementioned line is quite long.
  • Split the sentence.
• "into more modern quarters" – can this be elaborated upon? Was the Congress Square Hotel's location simply outdated?
• Wikilink prime time.
• I would wikilink digital television.
• "this changed in February 1986, when WCSH" – is the comma needed here?
  • Not particularly.

@LunaEatsTuna: Everything should be addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:49, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

Refs

Passes spotcheck on refs 9, 16, 25, 33, 34 and 40.

Others

• Rec adding template:use American English (though optional)

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